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by Melanator
Tue Aug 09, 2016 3:13 am
Forum: Your Trials
Topic: [T][CE] The Technical Turnabout ●
Replies: 17
Views: 7374

Re: [T][CE] The Technical Turnabout ●

Gah! Sorry about that! I thought I had found all of them... The loop has been fixed. No worries, that's what critics are there for. Anyway, here is the full Stream of Consciousness :) Hm... interesting intro. the killer seems to be the typical depraved person... but strangely confident. Dennis D'Fe...
by Melanator
Mon Aug 08, 2016 10:08 am
Forum: Your Trials
Topic: [T][CE] The Technical Turnabout ●
Replies: 17
Views: 7374

Re: [T][CE] The Technical Turnabout ●

Hey, what's up? Good to see your first trial. Imma give you a review via Stream of Consciousness. All criticism is meant to be constructive. for those of you who don't know what that is, its when the critic reviews the work as he/she experiences it. anyways without further ado.... Note: Frame Loop d...
by Melanator
Mon Feb 29, 2016 2:07 am
Forum: Your Trials
Topic: The Dragon's Turnabout (Released!) ●
Replies: 101
Views: 65462

Re: The Dragon's Turnabout (Released!) ●

This trial, truly incredible.
Spoiler : :
Say out of curiosity, what is the music for Phoenix when he struggles emotionally remembering his mother? I was trying to find it but it doesn't seem to be in the music credits. (I could be wrong) Its that somber music with the vocalizing.
by Melanator
Tue Jan 12, 2016 7:29 am
Forum: Your Trials
Topic: Phoenix Wright x FNAF
Replies: 8
Views: 3606

Re: Phoenix Wright x FNAF

I know you plan on fixing the errors, so I'll be very constructive on the criticism. Stream of Consciousness. Edgeworth needing a car ride home? That's weird... Franzisca drives with her whip in hand!? Hate to see her road rage. Fazbear Fright, ok so its a FNAF3 crossover. Maya seems to know a lot a...
by Melanator
Sun Dec 27, 2015 9:29 pm
Forum: Your Trials
Topic: The Despair inducing Turnabout
Replies: 17
Views: 6548

Re: The Despair inducing Turnabout

I like the idea of an Ace Attorney/ Danganronpa crossover. Both series just have a very well written plot that just as we try to figure out something about the overall situation, something happens and takes our attention away from it until the end of the story. I would love to collaborate with you o...
by Melanator
Sat Dec 12, 2015 11:48 pm
Forum: Your Trials
Topic: [T] [CE] The Normal Turnabout ●
Replies: 50
Views: 19054

Re: [T] [CE] The Normal Turnabout ●

Ok, time to get my weekly dose of storytelling. *cracks knuckles* Lets go. Stream of Consciousness: (Hope I'm doing this right) I will admit, the name for the trial was a great hook. What is normal anyway? lol Fan Art eh? Shows effort and puts a personal touch to the story. Nice job by the way. Wow,...
by Melanator
Mon Dec 07, 2015 10:20 am
Forum: Your Trials
Topic: [T] PWAA: Project Justice - Case 2 in development ●○○○○○
Replies: 153
Views: 52439

Re: [T] Project Justice: Case 1 - Update ○○○○○

Very well written prologue. Chapter 2 please. :) Thoughts in Action: (what I'm thinking as I play) Apollo has been forcibly removed from this equation. Ok... playing as.... Trucy!? This ought to be good.:) Judge Woods is weapons-grade adorable. She does a good job at doing her job. Makes Chambers lo...