[T] Turnabout in Cargo ●○○○○
This case is the first out of my 5 case game I'm planning on making. Turnabout in Cargo reboots the series as it ignores the main series events and is basically creating it's own personal Ace Attorney timeline.
Trial Former:http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=97958
Trial Latter: http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=99049
[T]Turnabout in Cargo ☆○○○○
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Re: [T]Turnabout in Cargo ●○○○○
☆ This case is pending a QA inspection to be featured.
This should take less than a week.
This should take less than a week.
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Re: [T]Turnabout in Cargo ☆○○○○
QA Review: Turnabout in Cargo
Something tells me the answer is no. That something is not the script.
I was surprised when I got a request to QA such a recent case, and I was looking forward to this one. Cases by new authors are wild cards. I've seen some new authors who are overambitious and some new authors who are very good. Where does this case end up? Read the review, and let's find out.
Something tells me the answer is no. That something is not the script.
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The format on Check #1 is similar to in my Normal review. The narrative section blends tightly with the other sections, and in the interests of not overwhelming you, I think it's best to skip that section.✮ – The Sparkling Feature Star is given for an aspect that makes your trial stand out even among the featured trials. Getting a Sparkling Feature Star means your trial is pretty much guaranteed to be featured after implementing the changes from check 2, unless it gets a Hollow Star.In [url=http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/forum/viewtopic.php?p=380232#p380232]Case featuring and QA[/url], ShadowEdgeworth wrote:They check that it has an overall story and gameplay of astounding quality; it should be really engaging, have interesting contradictions and be really fun.
+ – The Great Plus means that this aspect makes your good trial great. You don't need a Great Plus in every category, but you should have at least one Great Plus or Sparkling Feature Star for the trial to be featured.
✓✓ – The Double Check Mark means that this aspect is good enough for a featured trial. Almost everything in this area works solidly, but it lacks a "wow" factor. An otherwise great aspect that requires some non-trivial tweaking falls in here.
✓ – The Single Check Mark means that this aspect can be good enough for a featured trial, but requires not major, but non-trivial modifications to make it truly solid. You must not have any Single Check Marks in order to pass Check 2.
✰ – The Hollow Star marks a problem that can't be fixed without a major rewrite. A trial must not have any Hollow Stars in order to pass Check 1. If you get one, don't be discouraged! Remember that a Hollow Star is only a star that hasn't been filled yet. It's something you can work on when improving this trial or writing your next one, and once you've worked on it, go for another QA review!
Unlike the other marks, the Hollow Star and Single Check Mark only talk about how large of a rewrite is needed to be featured-trial good, not how good that part of the trial is.
Spoiler : Check #1: Here Be Spoilers! :
Spoiler : Check #2: Here Be Spoilers! :
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Spoiler : VERDICT :
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson