[T] A Journey of Turnabouts ○○○
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[T] A Journey of Turnabouts ○○○
(Boxart not final)
It is the year 20XX. Viktor Trump is the president of the country of Jamerica and of Trump Towers- the most mysterious and wealthiest company in the world. In Jamerica, defendants are “guilty until proven innocent,” and the rumored Video Game characters- or VGs for short- are said to live here. No one has ever been able to confirm their presence, but unexplained phenomenon, seemingly impossible crimes, and the lengths Trump Towers goes to cover them up keep the myth alive.
A young rookie defense attorney starts off his career in his first trial, but the outcome of the trial is beyond his wildest expectations. It is an outcome that will set him off on a journey to unravel the mysteries of the VGs, a journey to unravel the mysteries surrounding Trump Towers;
A journey to unravel the mysteries about himself.
The Turnabout of Power (In Progress- *Click Here to Play the Demo)
The Turnabout of Wisdom (To Be Developed)
The Turnabout of Courage (To Be Developed)
I'm working on writing Turnabout of Power at the moment and am busy finishing up college, so expect an update sometime in the summer.
*Some story elements, sprites, and character names will be different from the demo.
Re: [T] A Journey of Turnabouts ○○○
My thoughts (In the QA format, but THIS IS NOT AN OFFICIAL QA REVIEW):
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Re: [T] A Journey of Turnabouts ○○○
Thank you for the critique! I really appreciate it!DWard14 wrote:My thoughts (In the QA format, but THIS IS NOT AN OFFICIAL QA REVIEW):Spoiler : :
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- Enthalpy
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Re: [T] A Journey of Turnabouts ○○○
I opened up the case, but the "Loading sounds" bar showed a lot of red, which indicates that some of your sounds aren't loading. Can you check that all of your music/sound files are working? If they are, I'll look into why AAO is telling me some haven't loaded.
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Re: [T] A Journey of Turnabouts ○○○
I've played and play-tested it on Safari, Chrome, Firefox, and on different internet connections. It should be working fine.Enthalpy wrote:I opened up the case, but the "Loading sounds" bar showed a lot of red, which indicates that some of your sounds aren't loading. Can you check that all of your music/sound files are working? If they are, I'll look into why AAO is telling me some haven't loaded.
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Re: [T] A Journey of Turnabouts ○○○
Strange. Your custom music is refusing to load for me. I can access the music directly just fine, but not in the editor.
I can't think of an obvious reason why this might happen, but I may do some more testing.
I can't think of an obvious reason why this might happen, but I may do some more testing.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson