Ace attorney: Athena Cykes Moodful Justice
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Re: Ace attorney: Athena Cykes Moodful Justice
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Re: Ace attorney: Athena Cykes Moodful Justice
The first question you want to ask yourself is if you want this first case to be part of a larger story, the same way the first case of Dual Destinies had to do with The Phantom and the events of the last two cases.
I recommend not making this part of a larger story, because that's more complicated. A stand-alone case or two featuring Athena would be better for somebody just starting out.
I recommend not making this part of a larger story, because that's more complicated. A stand-alone case or two featuring Athena would be better for somebody just starting out.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Re: Ace attorney: Athena Cykes Moodful Justice
I finished it...
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Re: Ace attorney: Athena Cykes Moodful Justice
I wasn't clear in my last post; apologies.
I wanted you to let me know you when you had made your decision. I wasn't asking you to do it all just from that question.
Based on the latest edit, I assume you want this to be a stand-alone case. Good! But...
I wanted you to let me know you when you had made your decision. I wasn't asking you to do it all just from that question.
Based on the latest edit, I assume you want this to be a stand-alone case. Good! But...
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[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Re: Ace attorney: Athena Cykes Moodful Justice
Just a side note, the investigations court looks really weird with the sprites and I'm not really sure why you used them when you can use the normal courtroom which fit the sprites a lot more. I mean, I can appreciate the effort but it's only worth it if it adds something to your case which here it didn't. I don't know how you got the custom art but I think you should've spent more time on the writing and puzzles as those are unfortunately, not fleshed out enough. Hopefully I didn't sound overly negative.