I have been working hard on this and have had the idea for the trial for months. im still getting used to the editor but im doing good. i posted the trial with (WIP) in the title since ive only gotten to the first recess. i know of several typos and the massive problem of info only used in pressing conversations is very important and talked about later even if you didn't press and don't know wtf their talking about. but if anyone wants to critique anything either to my knowledge or something i did not even think about please tell me, i am prone to failure, even more so in spellieng.
my biggest worry is that i have been to focused on the big image in my head i'm not explaining it at all to the player.
oh and a link to it so you can actually try it out http://www.aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=99767
Turnabout Brotherhood : My First Trial
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Turnabout Brotherhood : My First Trial
Riki - Thanks to Riki's sidekicks, we win.
Reyn - Wha!? Who're you calling sidekick?
Riki - No see anyone else. Must be you.
Reyn - Stupid furry volleyball. I'm gonna...
Shulk - Reyn, you're such an easy target. *Laughs*
Reyn - Wha!? Who're you calling sidekick?
Riki - No see anyone else. Must be you.
Reyn - Stupid furry volleyball. I'm gonna...
Shulk - Reyn, you're such an easy target. *Laughs*
Re: Turnabout Brotherhood : My First Trial
Ah, since I've just popped up, allow me to help you showcase your trial.
You should make sure trial threads comply to these rules (trials themselves should comply with these rules as well, but nine times out of ten you're already obeying them)
Here's what you need to do to make a proper showcase that you haven't done yet:
[T] Turnabout Brotherhood ○
Seeing as this is a standard trial ([T]) and that there is a single, unfinished 'episode' (○)
Please comply with these showcasing rules as to ensure quality of the showcase and attract the appropriate audience. I'll edit this post with my review of the case up to the first recess once I have played it.
EDIT: Oh, and be prepared to wait patiently for a few days to get posts. These forums tend to be slow, so if activity seems to be dead, it's actually the normal rate. I've learned this the hard way, and I wish for you to learn it the easier one.
*Spoiler tagging rules can be seen seperated from showcasing rules here but you don't seem to have anything DGS or SOJ so you probably won't need them. Still, it's a good thing to give it a little read so that you know what the tag does in other trials.
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You should make sure trial threads comply to these rules (trials themselves should comply with these rules as well, but nine times out of ten you're already obeying them)
Here's what you need to do to make a proper showcase that you haven't done yet:
- "You should give information about the story of your case." - We have zero information on what the trial is about other than guessing from the title, so please include a basic description of the story. Spoilerless, of course.
- "You should place several tags at the front of your thread's title to show the type of case that you're showcasing." Ever wondered why all the other threads in this section have stuff like [C], [T] and [DGS♫]? They are tags that give preliminary information about what the type of trial we're dealing with and spoilers for unlocalized (officially or not) and recently released games (currently Dai Gyakuten Saiban 1/2 and Spirit of Justice)*.
[T] Turnabout Brotherhood ○
Seeing as this is a standard trial ([T]) and that there is a single, unfinished 'episode' (○)
Please comply with these showcasing rules as to ensure quality of the showcase and attract the appropriate audience. I'll edit this post with my review of the case up to the first recess once I have played it.
EDIT: Oh, and be prepared to wait patiently for a few days to get posts. These forums tend to be slow, so if activity seems to be dead, it's actually the normal rate. I've learned this the hard way, and I wish for you to learn it the easier one.
*Spoiler tagging rules can be seen seperated from showcasing rules here but you don't seem to have anything DGS or SOJ so you probably won't need them. Still, it's a good thing to give it a little read so that you know what the tag does in other trials.
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Spoiler : Thoughts :