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[M] Danganronpa: The Visual Novel
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Re: [M] Danganronpa: The Visual Novel
I just finished playing through this.
Could you describe what kind of case you wanted to make? Was this supposed to be funny, dramatic...? I honestly can't tell.
Could you describe what kind of case you wanted to make? Was this supposed to be funny, dramatic...? I honestly can't tell.
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It’s supposed to be a visual novel. I stated that in the title and beginning. You’re not supposed to actually DO anything, you just watch it like a book. Hence the name “Visual Novel”.
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Re: [M] Danganronpa: The Visual Novel
Let me be more specific.
What tone did you want to have? I couldn't tell if this was trying to make me laugh, was supposed to present a laidback few days during a relatively low-stress killing game, whether it was supposed to make me anxious for which characters would win the game, ect.
What tone did you want to have? I couldn't tell if this was trying to make me laugh, was supposed to present a laidback few days during a relatively low-stress killing game, whether it was supposed to make me anxious for which characters would win the game, ect.
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Re: [M] Danganronpa: The Visual Novel
It was supposed to have a varied tone. Like, one scene would be happy, another sad, another funny. It’s just varied. I worked on this over a 5-day split period and wasn’t sure what tone to use. I just kept jumping between tones. I don’t know if it’s my autism or what but it just varies in between scenes.
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Re: [M] Danganronpa: The Visual Novel
I see. Alright, so a few paragraphs of my thoughts. Let me know if you need me to clarify something.
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[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson