The start of a AO full game

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Mewcario
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The start of a AO full game

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Hey, I'm mewcario, a first time case-maker on this site who loves the AA series a lot. So much, in fact, that I'm making an entire game's worth of trials using this website's case maker. It will be released one full chapter at a time, and will feature a introduction, followed by a tutorial trial and three full sized cases.

Currently released is the introduction and tutorial trial against payne (who else!): http://www.aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=104538
(edit: fixed the link)

Warning, I'm a pretty lazy guy, as the intro will explain, I will probably try to use as many of the already provided sprites and backgrounds as much as possible, but will make some of my own when needed.

I hope you enjoy the game as the chapters are released, as I will be working hard to make them as enjoyable as the capcom games themselves.

Constructive criticism and comments are always appreciated to, so feel free to contact me or reply to this thread. Have a nice day, and don't forget, always seek the truth! The end is only justified through honest means! :apollo:
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Gamer2002
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Re: The start of a AO full game

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Yo. Welcome on AAO. The link to your trial is http://www.aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=104538 :p
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Mewcario
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Re: The start of a AO full game

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Gamer2002 wrote:Yo. Welcome on AAO. The link to your trial is http://www.aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=104538 :p
Thanks :lol: I was trying to link to the currently uploaded Sequence as a whole, but It didn't work out as I had expected.
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Tulipau
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Re: The start of a AO full game

Post by Tulipau »

Hi,

I have tried to play your trial and I have some feedback. I apologize if I say things weirdly (English is not my native language) and if I seem a bit harsh. I will just point some things to improve before you continue developing cases:

- The evidence is already on the Court Record when the game starts., which is unusual There should be an explanation so that it feels not weird for the player.
- You should add the details of the evidence properly. See: http://www.aaonline.fr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=50&t=7449
- "This case will be an easy win. The prosecution is payne, after all." Payne should start with "P", not "p". Being the first sentence into the trial, it gives a bad feeling about the writing.
- I like how the tutorial is presented. However, why there are not penalizations if I get the answers wrong? Or some help?
- "You're opening statement please, Mr. payne" Do you have something against Payne? Also *your
- You follow the style of the games really well: judge behavesproperly, witness appears as he should... It took me more than one trial to learn.

The idea for the case looks nice for an introduction for a series. I like how you write for the characters!

PS: I did not finish the trial yet, but I thought that it was good to leave some feedback as the thread is not currently active!
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Re: The start of a AO full game

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I think it would be better if you tell us more about the game in the title and description, it should get people interested better. Even just saying what happens at the start would be nice like Apollo getting attacked and having amnesia. Tonikaku, I hope you don't mind me let's playing your game for a bit here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lUpBxEn ... e=youtu.be

I admit, this video I kind of screwed up on but I swear the next one's better. Can I get post it too when I get it ready?
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