The earth is falling into chaos. Everything is being destroyed. In the middle of the destruction, a certain homicide draws a lawyer's attention...
[T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
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[T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
Entry for The Lawpocolypse contest.
The earth is falling into chaos. Everything is being destroyed. In the middle of the destruction, a certain homicide draws a lawyer's attention...
The earth is falling into chaos. Everything is being destroyed. In the middle of the destruction, a certain homicide draws a lawyer's attention...
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Warning: This ends suddenly, as it is quite incomplete.Spoiler : Credits :
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
Whoa. This is pretty good. I dare say I might just lose this competition.
My trials:Tales of a Turnabout http://aaonline.fr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=12553
Turnabout Reality http://aaonline.fr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=12949
Turnabout in the Spotlight viewtopic.php?p=782753#p782753
Turnabout Reality http://aaonline.fr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=12949
Turnabout in the Spotlight viewtopic.php?p=782753#p782753
Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
Awww, thanks dude. I'm sure you'll do great though.
[T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○ (repost)
So, this is a project I thought I gave up on, but I think I'm going to revive it. Feedback on what I currently have will be nice, and it will also help encourage me to finish this.
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
I went ahead and merged your two topics. I'll add this to the top my list of cases to play!
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
I take it reposts aren't allowed. Good to know. And I hope you enjoy!
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
Spoiler : Spoilers for this case and Turnabout Revolution :
http://www.aaonline.fr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=7959
As for some feedback,
Spoiler : Spoilers for this case :
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
I've added spoiler tags to your post. Please add them yourself any time something you want to say spoils an AAO case. Not everybody else has played those!
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
Ah, sorry about that!
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
I finished playing through this. Is there anything in particular that you want my opinion on?
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
Just a general summary and your thoughts is fine.
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○
Miscellaneous notes are below. I like this trial, and I'm interested to see where it goes.
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[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Spoiler : response :
also, here's something I noticed.
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