Hello, everyone!
I have made a (very) late rebuttal to Game Theory's "Phoenix Wright is a CRIMINAL" theory. If you want to know why it's late, read the disclaimer at the beginning of the trial.
Also, this trial is not playable, it's just an animation. I don't know how to make a trial playable yet, but if anyone is willing to help, I'll gladly accept it in the form of a PM.
I hope you guys like the trial, but let me make one thing clear: I DON'T HATE MATPAT/GAME THEORY. If you want to accuse me of hating MatPat instead of giving me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, then I won't be taking you seriously; instead I'll be ignoring your comment and moving on with living my life.
Trial Link: http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=106672 (IGNORE - Trial has been deleted)
[T] Game Theory Late Rebuttal Case ●
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Re: [T] Game Theory Late Rebuttal Case ●
Hello, everyone!
It's been awhile since I posted this, but I want to know: what are your thoughts on this animation? I want to find ways for me to improve on this site.
Also, please limit the thoughts to constructive criticism, because like I said before: if you try and say hateful things to me about hating MatPat, then I won't be willing to take you seriously; instead, your comment will be ignored and I'll be moving on with my life.
Also, hateful comments such as "You suck!" or "Loser!" or other things that are hateful for the sake of being hateful will also be ignored. Not only that, but the second I see said comments, they will be reported to the moderators as troll comments. And to the trolls: stop hating on people and go get a life.
It's been awhile since I posted this, but I want to know: what are your thoughts on this animation? I want to find ways for me to improve on this site.
Also, please limit the thoughts to constructive criticism, because like I said before: if you try and say hateful things to me about hating MatPat, then I won't be willing to take you seriously; instead, your comment will be ignored and I'll be moving on with my life.
Also, hateful comments such as "You suck!" or "Loser!" or other things that are hateful for the sake of being hateful will also be ignored. Not only that, but the second I see said comments, they will be reported to the moderators as troll comments. And to the trolls: stop hating on people and go get a life.
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So, I've noticed that I never really got ways to improve on my trials in the future. I just wanted to know, is my trial good or bad? If it is bad, how can I improve on my future trials?
I'm not trying to be rude, but like I said before, I want ways to improve on my trials in the future.
I'm not trying to be rude, but like I said before, I want ways to improve on my trials in the future.
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I'll give this my best shot.
I want to tell you a little bit about my background first, as, if you chose a random person from the forum to review this, I don't think you would have chosen me. I am not, myself, a case-maker or terribly experienced author in this genre. By and large, I've been a lurker on these forums, and I am a fan, albeit a casual one, of Game Theory. I have, however, also disagreed with him in the past. Indeed, I made a response of my own at one point to his "Why Mario is Mental" video. Mine was in a format inspired by Ace Attorney, but it was just a YouTube video. That, incidentally, is no longer publicly available. In any case, I'm not unfamiliar with trials on here, nor am I unfamiliar with responses to MatPat. I am, however, not very savvy in the trial editor, not experienced in writing trial feedback, and, perhaps especially important, I have not seen the video in question in full.
Conclusion: I have a few complaints, but most of these are relatively small. I think you came across as a bit harsh, and I think that the huge cast before the trial hurts more than it helps. That said, you evaded, in my eyes, some of the greater pitfalls, pacing issues being one of them, and your integration of sound and music was well-done. I don't think it would win any awards, but if you touched up the profiles and evidence and you were a little less harsh, I'd give this project a pretty solid thumbs-up.
I want to tell you a little bit about my background first, as, if you chose a random person from the forum to review this, I don't think you would have chosen me. I am not, myself, a case-maker or terribly experienced author in this genre. By and large, I've been a lurker on these forums, and I am a fan, albeit a casual one, of Game Theory. I have, however, also disagreed with him in the past. Indeed, I made a response of my own at one point to his "Why Mario is Mental" video. Mine was in a format inspired by Ace Attorney, but it was just a YouTube video. That, incidentally, is no longer publicly available. In any case, I'm not unfamiliar with trials on here, nor am I unfamiliar with responses to MatPat. I am, however, not very savvy in the trial editor, not experienced in writing trial feedback, and, perhaps especially important, I have not seen the video in question in full.
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To plasmacarrot,
Thank you so much for the review and critique. This helps a lot! Now, to explain why I did what I did.
Nevertheless, thanks for reviewing this trial. It helps to make my future trials even better!
~BDC
Thank you so much for the review and critique. This helps a lot! Now, to explain why I did what I did.
Spoiler : :
~BDC
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Hello everyone,
I had to delete the trial due to a malfunction with the permalink website I used. I will give you guys the link to the YouTube video of the now-deleted trial should you want to see it again.
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w4Jb8A5EoGc
I had to delete the trial due to a malfunction with the permalink website I used. I will give you guys the link to the YouTube video of the now-deleted trial should you want to see it again.
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w4Jb8A5EoGc
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Your response to the person who played your trial should be written in a spoiler tag, btw. Will make it take up less space and avoid spoiling it to anyone who visits this thread. That, and its a spoiler.