[T] [DGS♫] Fallen Justice: Sins of the Past ●○○○○○

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[T] [DGS♫] Fallen Justice: Sins of the Past ●○○○○○ 

Postby DetectiveWhite » Wed Nov 20, 2019 9:58 pm

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Months after the so-called "Dark Age of the Law" is over, Apollo is thrown into a war between a corrupt former lawyer, his mentor and the government, now the question is whether he will leave victory behind, or pursue it as he always did.

This story takes place after the events of Dual Destinies.

Prologue - Jail Turnabout

Apollo Justice, a simple lawyer is called to defend someone he wished never to see in his life.

http://www.aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=111474

Spoiler : Screenshots :
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Spoiler : Credits/Spoiler :
Characters:
Athena Sprites: mercurialSK
Profile Image: Anyare
Phoenix Sprites: Hesseldahl
Apollo Sprites: Tap
Daphne (Misha Olina) Sprites: Evolina
Yolanda (Tori Labbe) Sprites: DragonTrainer
Gaspen Sprites: mariofan5000
Skull (Dylan Smith) Sprites: DragonTrainer
Cachak (Hercule Suchet) Sprites: Dragon Trainer

Locations:
Office by: Greeny

Music:
Science: MegaMan Star Force OST - Science
Daphne Theme: Persona 5 - Last Surprise Instrumental
Moment of Truth: The Great Stray ~ Suspense (Part One) - Dai Gyakuten Saiban


Episode 1 - The Brother's Turnabout

Writing - 100%

Case - 0%

Episode 2 - Friendly Turnabout and Betrayal Truth

Writing - 100%

Case - 0%

Episode 3 - Invitation to a Turnabout

Writing - 25%

Case - 0%

Episode 4 - Princess Turnabout

Writing - 10%

Case - 0%

Episode 5 - My Turnabout

Writing - 5%

Case - 0%


Team:
Creator/Writer/Case Programmer: DetectiveWhite

Sprite Artist: Needed (Because it's better than picking up some random characters from the thread.)

Proofreaders: Needed (At least two or three.)

To contact me send me an MP on AAO.

Note:

I've been away from AAO for a long time, but I really wanted to do something on Ace Attorney's fandom that everyone could have fun with, so I'm doing this fan series. Anyone who wants to help and give constructive criticism is welcome.
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Re: [T] [DGS♫] Fallen Justice: Sins of the Past ●○○○○○ 

Postby theusjshjdhdne » Tue Nov 26, 2019 8:10 pm

This was a pretty good case!

Spoiler : :
I really liked the silhouettes for Apollo and Kristoph. The characters were also really on point, especially with their reactions towards both Apollo and his decision to defend Kristoph.
One minor gripe, though, is that presenting the knife in the first testimony without pressing the proper statement to get the keys can lock you into a permanent loop until you restart. A proofreader would also be useful, though the English is written finely and understandable. Again, very promising and can't wait to see more.
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Re: [T] [DGS♫] Fallen Justice: Sins of the Past ●○○○○○ 

Postby DetectiveWhite » Wed Nov 27, 2019 4:24 pm

theusjshjdhdne wrote:This was a pretty good case!

Spoiler : :
I really liked the silhouettes for Apollo and Kristoph. The characters were also really on point, especially with their reactions towards both Apollo and his decision to defend Kristoph.
One minor gripe, though, is that presenting the knife in the first testimony without pressing the proper statement to get the keys can lock you into a permanent loop until you restart. A proofreader would also be useful, though the English is written finely and understandable. Again, very promising and can't wait to see more.


Thanks for the criticism, I am really unused to using cross-examination mechanics, so I must have made a mistake or two, I will try to find what is making that loop and make sure it will work well and the next case is already been making, and would be really useful a proofreader.

By the way, thanks for playing the case.
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