I just hope your case isn't too long because I do have some manga to finish (and an outfit to sew even though I've never sewed before!)
La reseña del juego (google translate yes)
Spoiler : :
-Nice intro. I can't really judge on the entire case or anything, but I felt it seemed a bit... er, I'll save comments at the end. I still like it though. But yeah... er...
-Courtroom No. 1. No # in the games, if you were trying for realism or canon-ish.
-I like the deviation from "OMG I'M SO NERVOUS I'M GOING TO PEE IN MY PANTS". It sort of builds up the confident, independent Phoenix we were introduced in AJ.
-How long is the pause with Maya? Maybe it's just GC, but a bit shorter wouldn't hurt. Of course, just me being picky. It's fine~
-I forgot Feenie uses Pearls not Pearly. XD It's been so long. Nothing else to comment, other than it seems like idle chatter. AND WHAT HAPPENED TO THE MUSIC GAHHHH GC YOUU...
-MY MOTHER IS DROWNING MY MOTHER IS OMG I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS DEE WHATEVERHERNAME WAS ER maybe a shock sound would have helped, although maybe you weren't trying to surprise us that much. Either way, I didn't expect that. I expected some sort of "custom sprite"/"defendant" like people do in their first trials. Again, good job with different stuff from old boring routine.
-No orange? Only red for emphasis?
-Might be no place to correct you of grammar, but just my preference picking. "...And I found her...guilty." No space after the three dots?
-Is it me or is Dee's voice not female blip?
-Ultra Mega sounds more dorky than Greek to me... Man, Feenie is smart! >: D
-Again, No. 1, not #1.
-HAHAHAHAHA POWER RANGERS--*is whipped*
-I love your trial already. XD XD XD
-Are you stopping the music on purpose? It makes the trial feel... empty, but again, pure opinion.
-How do you know if he's Morris Fashoff if he's unidentifiable? What if it's some escaped internee? Maybe his fingerprints but er... still... mmmm...
-Oh, it's a Codename? What do you mean...?
-Oh wait... not only was the face burned, the ENTIRE BODY. Okay then, disregard my earlier comments.
-Ha ha... shocking... but no because I saw your name in the papers Edgey.
-Green for passed away? No orange/red? Not that it manners much I guess...
-XD XD EDGEY AND FRANZY <3<3 brother/sister fighting~
-No sound effects at Witness Testimony sprite? GC STOP WORKING YOUR TRICKS
-Awww... AND THAT WAS A VERY CREATIVE WAY TO INTRODUCE SOME TUTORIAL!
Extra points, extra points!!
-...wait, wait, wait, WHY ARE YOU EXPLAINING A TRIAL IS IN SESSION oh whatever it's AA...
-*coughforeshadowinghobohodoehcough*
-*saving* oh wait i was right hheheheheh okay continue on with story~
-Male blip when Franziska asks Phoenix if he isn't so sure...
-Strange how the Judge directly comments about the corpse when he did so earlier again when Edgeworth finishes his testimony about his phone...
-I don't think Phoenix would use the other word for poop but again, me being picky~
-When I press Edgeworth after the knife's secret, he is floating on the defense's desk?
-Same thing after.
-...OMG I KNOW WHO IT IS KINZO--*is shot*
-And floating Edgey when I press...
-AND AGAIN
-No name when he says "Gah!".
-It's kind of funny how Edgey shakes his head...
-I like the music. I like where this is going~
-No need for the "d" word either, but again...
-Red truth. Right, Feenie. Right.
-Found it. What I was suspecting all along.
I like it so far.
-Hahaahahah... I LOVE THIS MOMENT! "That is not English." XD
-NOOO I DIED oh well good thing i saved~
-Oh heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeck no, you do not interrupt my owning you time, Franzy!
-OMG MIA APPEARED WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY Phoenix is still a wimp. > >
-WAIT WHAAAAAAT FOUND?????????
-Wait, how did Mia get in there...? Pearly visiting her mother?
-Yesseeeeeeeeee i finished!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Courtroom No. 1. No # in the games, if you were trying for realism or canon-ish.
-I like the deviation from "OMG I'M SO NERVOUS I'M GOING TO PEE IN MY PANTS". It sort of builds up the confident, independent Phoenix we were introduced in AJ.
-How long is the pause with Maya? Maybe it's just GC, but a bit shorter wouldn't hurt. Of course, just me being picky. It's fine~
-I forgot Feenie uses Pearls not Pearly. XD It's been so long. Nothing else to comment, other than it seems like idle chatter. AND WHAT HAPPENED TO THE MUSIC GAHHHH GC YOUU...
-MY MOTHER IS DROWNING MY MOTHER IS OMG I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS DEE WHATEVERHERNAME WAS ER maybe a shock sound would have helped, although maybe you weren't trying to surprise us that much. Either way, I didn't expect that. I expected some sort of "custom sprite"/"defendant" like people do in their first trials. Again, good job with different stuff from old boring routine.
-No orange? Only red for emphasis?
-Might be no place to correct you of grammar, but just my preference picking. "...And I found her...guilty." No space after the three dots?
-Is it me or is Dee's voice not female blip?
-Ultra Mega sounds more dorky than Greek to me... Man, Feenie is smart! >: D
-Again, No. 1, not #1.
-HAHAHAHAHA POWER RANGERS--*is whipped*
-I love your trial already. XD XD XD
-Are you stopping the music on purpose? It makes the trial feel... empty, but again, pure opinion.
-How do you know if he's Morris Fashoff if he's unidentifiable? What if it's some escaped internee? Maybe his fingerprints but er... still... mmmm...
-Oh, it's a Codename? What do you mean...?
-Oh wait... not only was the face burned, the ENTIRE BODY. Okay then, disregard my earlier comments.
-Ha ha... shocking... but no because I saw your name in the papers Edgey.
-Green for passed away? No orange/red? Not that it manners much I guess...
-XD XD EDGEY AND FRANZY <3<3 brother/sister fighting~
-No sound effects at Witness Testimony sprite? GC STOP WORKING YOUR TRICKS
-Awww... AND THAT WAS A VERY CREATIVE WAY TO INTRODUCE SOME TUTORIAL!
Extra points, extra points!!-...wait, wait, wait, WHY ARE YOU EXPLAINING A TRIAL IS IN SESSION oh whatever it's AA...
-*coughforeshadowinghobohodoehcough*
-*saving* oh wait i was right hheheheheh okay continue on with story~
-Male blip when Franziska asks Phoenix if he isn't so sure...
-Strange how the Judge directly comments about the corpse when he did so earlier again when Edgeworth finishes his testimony about his phone...
-I don't think Phoenix would use the other word for poop but again, me being picky~
-When I press Edgeworth after the knife's secret, he is floating on the defense's desk?
-Same thing after.
-...OMG I KNOW WHO IT IS KINZO--*is shot*
-And floating Edgey when I press...
-AND AGAIN
-No name when he says "Gah!".
-It's kind of funny how Edgey shakes his head...
-I like the music.
I like where this is going~-No need for the "d" word either, but again...
-Red truth. Right, Feenie. Right.
-Found it. What I was suspecting all along.
I like it so far.-Hahaahahah... I LOVE THIS MOMENT! "That is not English." XD
-NOOO I DIED oh well good thing i saved~
-Oh heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeck no, you do not interrupt my owning you time, Franzy!
-OMG MIA APPEARED WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY Phoenix is still a wimp. > >
-WAIT WHAAAAAAT FOUND?????????
-Wait, how did Mia get in there...? Pearly visiting her mother?
-Yesseeeeeeeeee i finished!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
