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Didn't we already have one of those?Case One: The First Turnabout
Oh, and thanks for the greeting. Nice to meet you!drvonkitty wrote:Head Case-Maker
drvonkitty: I create all of the cases in AAO.
drvonkitty: I create all of the CT cases in AAO.
drvonkitty wrote:I know, the First Turnabout is a bit overused. It'll be changed to something more fitting later on when we think up a proper name
Am I the only one who remembers that "The First Turnabout" was the name of an actual AA case? >_<BowTie wrote:Eh, it's always a generic first case name. We can post information, but that would kind of spoil the case.
I know. The first one, in fact.Wooper wrote:drvonkitty wrote:I know, the First Turnabout is a bit overused. It'll be changed to something more fitting later on when we think up a proper nameAm I the only one who remembers that "The First Turnabout" was the name of an actual AA case? >_<BowTie wrote:Eh, it's always a generic first case name. We can post information, but that would kind of spoil the case.
Thanks! At some point, you'll get a PM.percey wrote:Hmm. I could beta-test, I have free time after all.
All right, I'll change all of that. Thanks for the tip!Enthalpy wrote:I would offer to beta-test, but I'm fairly busy with my own game. Regardless, I hope this goes well. Not too many new authors actually bother to go through testing, and it really shows. I'm glad to see that you are.
Looking at the screenshots, there is one problem. Frames with more than three lines of text on them are generally frowned upon, as you don't see those in the official games. I would recommend splitting it into two frames and connecting them with an ellipsis if necessary.Spoiler : Example of ellipsis from 2-2 :
