[T] Two Sides of the Same Turnabout ★
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Re: [T] Two Sides of the Same Turnabout ☆
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@CloudRed1988: I may be able to help. Can you describe what the trouble is in a little more detail? My memory on what the nature of that section is is a little foggy.
The score is still Q to 12. Shirley Homes avatar by my Invisible Friend. They're an awesome artist!
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@WhiteZekrom:
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Re: [T] Two Sides of the Same Turnabout ☆
Two Sides of the Same Turnabout
Two checks of the same QA review
Welcome to the world of Blackrune and Bad Player.
Check 1Two checks of the same QA review
Welcome to the world of Blackrune and Bad Player.
Check 1 is for the general enjoyability of your trial. In my reviews, I'll summarize my opinions on what aspects of your trial stood out to me the most, and assign one of the following symbols to them:In [url=http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/forum/viewtopic.php?p=380232#p380232]Case featuring and QA[/url], ShadowEdgeworth wrote:They check that it has an overall story and gameplay of astounding quality; it should be really engaging, have interesting contradictions and be really fun.
✮ – The Sparkling Feature Star is given for an aspect that is so amazing it makes your trial stand out even among the featured trials. Getting a Sparkling Feature Star means your trial is pretty much guaranteed to be featured after implementing the changes from check 2 unless it gets a Hollow Star – although a Sparkling Feature Star will very likely motivate me to be more lenient with Hollow Stars.
+ – The Great Plus means that this aspect is one of the strengths of your trial, something that makes your trial interesting, enjoyable or memorable, something that makes your good trial great. You absolutely don't need a Great Plus in every category, but you should have some for the trial to be featured.
✓ – The Quality Check Mark means that this aspect is good enough for a featured trial and any problems can be solved without a major rewrite. Note that I will only list something that got a Quality Check Mark in my review if I have something more important to say about it than "Alright! Good job!".
✰ – The Hollow Star marks a problem that can't be fixed without a major rewrite. A trial must not have any Hollow Stars in order to pass Check 1, however, if you get one, don't be discouraged! Remember that a Hollow Star is only a star that hasn't been filled yet. It's something you can work on when improving this trial or writing your next one, and once you've worked on it, go for another QA review!
(Note that I build my opinion and decide on my verdict before using any symbols. They are only a way to express and organize my opinion.)
Spoiler : Check 1 – MAJOR SPOILERS! :
Check 2 is for all the minor things that can easily be fixed, but help make your trial as good as possible. Don't be discouraged by seeing only flaws of your trial listed here – that's what this section is for, and every trial will have something listed here in its first QA review.In [url=http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/forum/viewtopic.php?p=380232#p380232]Case featuring and QA[/url], ShadowEdgeworth wrote:They check for issues that you need to fix, such as bugs, spelling mistakes, oddly used music tracks, etc. They list these issues in their inspection reports.
For details on the individual sections, check this thread.
Presentation and bugs
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Congrats, Bad Player, Blackrune! This truly is a stellar case, and it's got one of the best mysteries I've ever seen. Definitely deserving of being Featured.
The score is still Q to 12. Shirley Homes avatar by my Invisible Friend. They're an awesome artist!
A huge thanks to my Invisible Friend for this AMAZING Shirley Homes art!
Shirley Homes
Connie Harper
A big thanks to gotMLK7 for this Shirley Homes and Connie Harper art. He is an awesome artist!
A huge thanks to my Invisible Friend for this AMAZING Shirley Homes art!
Shirley Homes
Connie Harper
A big thanks to gotMLK7 for this Shirley Homes and Connie Harper art. He is an awesome artist!
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Congratulations! Truly well-deserved.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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This is the stuff me and Rune disagree with
Evolina deLuna wrote:Logic and gameplayNote how I didn't find anything in the entire Reverse.Spoiler : :
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Answers in purple.Bad Player wrote:This is the stuff me and Rune disagree withEvolina deLuna wrote:Logic and gameplayNote how I didn't find anything in the entire Reverse.Spoiler : :
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Another red reply.Evolina deLuna wrote:Answers in purple.Bad Player wrote:This is the stuff me and Rune disagree withEvolina deLuna wrote:Logic and gameplayNote how I didn't find anything in the entire Reverse.Spoiler : :
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Spoiler : Chiming In :
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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I'd accept that.Enthalpy wrote:EDIT: BP's thought below was what I meant. Fixed.Spoiler : Chiming In :
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Super-important announcement: All fades are now back and working again (in firefox)
we also finished making the qa changes, like, a couple of weeks ago, but i don't think anybody really cares about that
we also finished making the qa changes, like, a couple of weeks ago, but i don't think anybody really cares about that
Re: [T] Two Sides of the Same Turnabout ★
★ The QA inspection is complete. This case is now featured. Congratulations!