A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
Gotta say, I think Blader's going to take this one. Really loved that trial. I know it has pretty much nothing to do with Fall, but none of them really do, so...
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
P-p-p-p-PARRIE LIKED IT?!?!
Wow, I'm shocked. Here I am thinking it's too in-jokey to pass. Not complaining though!
EDIT: ZEEL LIKED IT TOO?!?!?!
I'm glad it wasn't so injoky, then. And to think, this is a last-ditch entry I made up in 3 days...
Wow, I'm shocked. Here I am thinking it's too in-jokey to pass. Not complaining though!
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I'm glad it wasn't so injoky, then. And to think, this is a last-ditch entry I made up in 3 days...
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
...Are you honestly saying that you made all that up on the top of your head?
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
Yes, I seriously made this up as a last minute entry because I wasn't going to finish my original one in time.
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
See kids? That's the true way to be successful - do all of your work at the very last minute, then soak in all of the praise!BBblader wrote:Yes, I seriously made this up as a last minute entry because I wasn't going to finish my original one in time.
It's how Glase Canon would do it, and it's how you should do it too.
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
It's Glase Canon man. Give the guy a gosh darn trial series!
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
...After seeing how well received this has been, I think I just might do that!
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
Spoiler : This review contains spoilers for this trial. :
OVERALL RATING
Attention to prompt;
'Fall': 10/10
Quality of Trial; Serious:
1. Storyline: 6/10
2. Murder: 8/10
3. Contradictions: 7/10
4. Continuity: 5/10
FINAL MARK
36/50
72%
Sorry guys! It had a really inventive murder, but things just didn't make sense!
Up next: Hold it!
Sorry this is taking so long, everyone. I'm not very fast at playing trials, and I've had stuff to do all day.
Attention to prompt;
'Fall': 10/10
Quality of Trial; Serious:
1. Storyline: 6/10
2. Murder: 8/10
3. Contradictions: 7/10
4. Continuity: 5/10
FINAL MARK
36/50
72%
Sorry guys! It had a really inventive murder, but things just didn't make sense!
Up next: Hold it!
Sorry this is taking so long, everyone. I'm not very fast at playing trials, and I've had stuff to do all day.
call me Parrie
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
Ahh, well, it was all in good fun.paradoxinparticles wrote:Spoiler : This review contains spoilers for this trial. :OVERALL RATING
Attention to prompt;
'Fall': 10/10
Quality of Trial; Serious:
1. Storyline: 6/10
2. Murder: 8/10
3. Contradictions: 7/10
4. Continuity: 5/10
FINAL MARK
36/50
72%
Sorry guys! It had a really inventive murder, but things just didn't make sense!
Up next: Hold it!
Sorry this is taking so long, everyone. I'm not very fast at playing trials, and I've had stuff to do all day.
Spoiler : Spoilerish :
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
Diego wrote:Ahh, well, it was all in good fun.paradoxinparticles wrote:Spoiler : This review contains spoilers for this trial. :OVERALL RATING
Attention to prompt;
'Fall': 10/10
Quality of Trial; Serious:
1. Storyline: 6/10
2. Murder: 8/10
3. Contradictions: 7/10
4. Continuity: 5/10
FINAL MARK
36/50
72%
Sorry guys! It had a really inventive murder, but things just didn't make sense!
Up next: Hold it!
Sorry this is taking so long, everyone. I'm not very fast at playing trials, and I've had stuff to do all day.Spoiler : Spoilerish :
Spoiler : :
call me Parrie
"I will not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. I will face my fear and will let it pass through me."
-Frank Herbert
I make boxart now
"I will not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. I will face my fear and will let it pass through me."
-Frank Herbert
I make boxart now
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
We had an awesome idea, we just had to rush the script. A lot of things were added and dropped. To answer some questions:
Miley didn't know he was dead until the body landed.
Diego added in the ring thing due to lack of contradiction ideas.
I didn't think about air pressure...my bad...
I guess we forgot to add in the fact that Miles (not Edgeworth, that was my bad on naming) was trying to impress his wife, who was a flying fan when we discussed it over Gmail.
And yes, "grack" is the best word ever.
I guess we just didn't know how much time we really had, and the whole thing was rushed. If I can make a suggestion to whoever wins, though, if you go for a "holiday" challenge next, make sure it doesn't offend anybody's religion. Just warning you.
Oh, and Diego, you did make it sound like he was hitting on her when you wrote that.
EDIT: Oh, I almost forgot: I wnated to clear up the name puns in the trial.
Miles Highe-miles high
Miley Highe-mile high
Spike Tackles-spectacles
Jett Sonic-jet, sonic speed
Alan Prie-anagram of "airplane"
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
Not a terrible entry - probably the most theme relevant one in fact, so that's a plus. I must say though, it was incredibly easy, in fact it may be the easiest serious trial I've ever played, except maybe The First Turnabout... It may be the only trial on here that I didn't screw up once on...
Now, it's not really a bad thing for parts of a trial to be easy, but it's just, as it goes on, I feel it should get tougher, and this one never really did.
Now, it's not really a bad thing for parts of a trial to be easy, but it's just, as it goes on, I feel it should get tougher, and this one never really did.
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
I'm going to bet a 0% on mine, I just know it. I did my trial very last minute too... after all, I did have a lot of homework that day. Don't teachers understand I have a life?!
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
Hold it! and Mii-sama, I'm really sorry but you'll have to wait a little longer. I got really really REALLY sick after dinner and I just can't do anything.
Meph, I'm SO sorry. I know you want to get the next competition started as soon as possible but I just... can't. Not right now.
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call me Parrie
"I will not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. I will face my fear and will let it pass through me."
-Frank Herbert
I make boxart now
"I will not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. I will face my fear and will let it pass through me."
-Frank Herbert
I make boxart now
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout
NO PROBLEM! Life comes first! Get well-rested and better before making your final decision, okay? We're in no hurry.