Opinion on my first sprite.

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LuckySt
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Opinion on my first sprite.

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So i was looking around the website and after i saw all this amazing sprite.I tried to make one.
So i made an OC.
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His name is Travis Falls.A 17 year old Defense Attorney who lives in country named Aib'Res.
(Well, i hope i did good...
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Re: Opinion on my first sprite.

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Looking good! Nice work for your first try!
At risk of being rude, the only feedback I can give on improving is to make the shading a little neater, it looks a bit rough. All that takes is just a bit of time cleaning it up once the sprite's done.
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Re: Opinion on my first sprite.

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SuperAj3 wrote:Looking good! Nice work for your first try!
At risk of being rude, the only feedback I can give on improving is to make the shading a little neater, it looks a bit rough. All that takes is just a bit of time cleaning it up once the sprite's done.
Thank you and i agree that shading need some work.I'll try improving it overtime.
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