Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 21/2/12)

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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Broocevelt » Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:15 pm

I mean there should be more hair on the top, because it looks like there's only a very thin layer of hair on the top and it looks weird compared to the hair on the side. Give it more 'volume' or however you say it on the top, make it a little more dense ;)
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Dypo deLina » Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:17 pm

Ah, that. That was based on the art AABattery made.

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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Broocevelt » Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:19 pm

The I think you should hide some of the hair on the sides, that would fit even better the official art ;)
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Dypo deLina » Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:20 pm

Hmm, maybe... thing is, I actually tried that at first but it ended up looking sort of funky... :XD:
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Broocevelt » Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:20 pm

xD Give it another shot then, I think it'll look better ;)
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Dypo deLina » Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:24 pm

Danielinhoni wrote:xD Give it another shot then, I think it'll look better ;)


I might do it tonight then, because for some odd reason, I lack homework at the moment... :o
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Dypo deLina » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:20 am

Animations for the normal pose are done~

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...Yeah, I'm stubborn. >_> I didn't like the shorter hair on the side thing.

EDIT: ...Wut? His blinking animation doesn't loop for some reason...
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Zeel1™ » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:25 am

Seems to be looping fine for me...
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Dypo deLina » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:35 am

Zeel1™ wrote:Seems to be looping fine for me...


Really? Neat, I'll stop worrying then. :awesome:
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Koda » Fri Feb 17, 2012 3:13 pm

Dypo deLina wrote:Animations for the normal pose are done~

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...Yeah, I'm stubborn. >_> I didn't like the shorter hair on the side thing.

EDIT: ...Wut? His blinking animation doesn't loop for some reason...

Much better than your last attempt, but he really needs some meat on his arms as everyone said. Fix those and it will be amazing.

Even though you made it better it's still really thin. :o
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Dypo deLina » Fri Feb 17, 2012 4:15 pm

Hm, yeah, I just compared the sprite to Tigre (who has of similar height) and Raven's arms were waaaaaay thinner than his. xD

*sigh* Guess I'll have to reanimate him after fixing the arms...

EDIT: How's this?

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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Sleuth » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:22 pm

Dypo deLina wrote:Hm, yeah, I just compared the sprite to Tigre (who has of similar height) and Raven's arms were waaaaaay thinner than his. xD

*sigh* Guess I'll have to reanimate him after fixing the arms...

EDIT: How's this?

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Too me, it looks more like the pose of the arms is off...

It might look better to have both arms at his side, or one arm akimbo and the other flat.
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Dypo deLina » Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:52 pm

Shadowsleuth wrote:
Dypo deLina wrote:Hm, yeah, I just compared the sprite to Tigre (who has of similar height) and Raven's arms were waaaaaay thinner than his. xD

*sigh* Guess I'll have to reanimate him after fixing the arms...

EDIT: How's this?

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Too me, it looks more like the pose of the arms is off...

It might look better to have both arms at his side, or one arm akimbo and the other flat.


Fix'd.

Also, do you really mean something is off, or just that it'd look better if I'd drawn it a different way?
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Sleuth » Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:53 pm

Dypo deLina wrote:
Shadowsleuth wrote:
Dypo deLina wrote:Hm, yeah, I just compared the sprite to Tigre (who has of similar height) and Raven's arms were waaaaaay thinner than his. xD

*sigh* Guess I'll have to reanimate him after fixing the arms...

EDIT: How's this?

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Too me, it looks more like the pose of the arms is off...

It might look better to have both arms at his side, or one arm akimbo and the other flat.


Fix'd.

Also, do you really mean something is off, or just that it'd look better if I'd drawn it a different way?

I think it'd look better if you drew it differently.
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Re: Dypo's Art Thread (Updated 16/2/12) 

Postby Dypo deLina » Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:56 pm

I see... well, maybe it would interest you to know that your second suggestion was in reality the original design, which I changed because I thought it looked weird. xD

I'll see about incorporating the changes, though... or maybe I could make it a different pose, who knows?
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