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Thursday's Sprite Gallery (OC: Lucida Farell)(Requests ON) 

Postby Thursday » Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:10 am

Editing sprites has always been a hobby of mine, so I've decided to do some for PW.
Any constructive criticism is welcome, opinions too :nod:
Also, I'm only decent at editing existing sprites, so OCs are very rare from me :wink:

Edits
Spoiler : Apollo Justice Front Sprites :
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Base sprite: Apollo Front Sprite
I've started making these for a new case I started, where Apollo is the defendant. (Click my sig to visit the trial thread.)
I'll try making more for all (or most) of his court expressions, and maybe even some new ones :wink:
These may be used by anyone, but please give credit, as these weren't easy to make.


OCs
Spoiler : Maaté Protago :
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Name: Maaté "Matt" Protago (origin: Ma'at Protagonist)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Original Sprite: Phoenix Wright (what a surprise)
This is my first and a new defense attorney that I might use for future trials. I'll try to get in more GIFs as soon as possible.

Spoiler : Rowyn Deuteral :
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Name: Rowyn Deuteral (origin: rowan, deuteragonist)
Age: 44
Maaté's mentor. Very experienced in law, but also quite kind.


Spoiler : Lucida Farell :
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Name: Lucida Farell (origin: lucid, fair)
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Original Sprite: Ema Skye (PW) and Apollo Justice
Maaté's assistant, also hoping to get into law. She accompanies him to witness trials in action, but ends up keeping him on track most of the time.


Spoiler : Ace Pryme :
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Name: Ace Pryme (origin: ace and prime)
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Original Sprite: Jake Marshall
A top detective in my current trial. Cannot be used without permission.


Court Minis

Spoiler : : :
Klavier Gavin
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Comedy

Spoiler : Wrightroll :
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Inspired by Shadowsleuth's "Turnabout Commercial." Presents spam, objects to moderators, and stops perma bans... It's the Wrightroll!


NEW! Sprite Comics


Revamps
Spoiler : Phoenix Wright :
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Textures from: Lamiroir (Suit), Brushel (Tie), Daryan (Hair)
More animations needed for my trial. Can be used by anyone but please give credit :wink:


Requests
2/3 request(s) remaining
Spoiler : Klavier in Younger Attire :
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Requested by: BBblader
Simple but fun edit.
Do not use without permission.

Spoiler : Neil Marshall: Prosecutor of the Wild West Box Art :
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Requested by: EdgeOverRuled
My newest box art, made for EdgeOverRuled's new (and interesting) trial series.


Rips
These can be used by anyone, no credit needed. (Long as you don't claim they're yours.)
Spoiler : AJ Courtroom Blurs :
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An idea that popped up when I looked at Jean of mArc's art thread.
Seeing as how he didn't rip the AJ ones, and authenticity guys (like me) will be needing them, I went through the trouble of ripping them (Camstudio + MS GIF editor) and arranging them (GIMP).
Just like Jean of mArc's, the defense to prosection/vice versa delay is 40, while the witness to defense/prosecution is 20.
(Also, ignore the black lines; they were on the blurred frames when I ripped them.)

Spoiler : Game Over Doors :
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Another thing exempt from the editor and CR. The timing isn't perfect, but it goes quite well with the sound effect. (Though the delay before looping is a little too short.)


Box Arts
Spoiler : Revival, and Turnabout :
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2D
Too long; click to view

Yet another item to promote my trial :P
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby LunchPolice » Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:25 am

Looks nice! The only problem I can spot is that there appears to be a yellow button to the
right of the tie left over from Phoenix, and it doesn't contrast well. I recommend recolouring it
or removing it.
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby paradoxinparticles » Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:32 am

LunchPolice wrote:Looks nice! The only problem I can spot is that there appears to be a yellow button to the
right of the tie left over from Phoenix, and it doesn't contrast well. I recommend recolouring it
or removing it.

That's the attorney's badge, isn't it? You can't take that off OR change it, really...
But this is a pretty great sprite, I'm very impressed :)
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby Thursday » Thu Nov 18, 2010 2:36 am

paradoxinparticles wrote:
LunchPolice wrote:Looks nice! The only problem I can spot is that there appears to be a yellow button to the
right of the tie left over from Phoenix, and it doesn't contrast well. I recommend recolouring it
or removing it.

That's the attorney's badge, isn't it? You can't take that off OR change it, really...

Yeah, I decided to keep it on, but looking at it now, it looks more like a blemish than a badge :lol:
I'm still deciding how to recolour it... Any suggestions for colours?

LunchPolice wrote:Looks nice!

paradoxinparticles wrote:But this is a pretty great sprite, I'm very impressed :)

Thanks for the feedback! :mrgreen:
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby Dypo deLina » Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:49 am

Like LP and Parrie-Chan have already said, the badge looks clumsy because of the contrast. I'd recommend making it slightly darker until it contrasts enough. Although, a dark brown badge would look kinda filthy, so some caution might be in order. :)

Other than that, the only other things that caught my eye are the missing outline on the ponytail and the clumsy mouth animation. The mouth hasn't been synched with the jaw properly. I recommend you look at Phoenix's spritesheet as reference for this.

Still, not bad at all. I hope to see more of your sprites in the future. :D
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby LunchPolice » Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:51 am

Try just giving the badge an outline maybe?
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby paradoxinparticles » Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:59 am

Dypo wrote:Other than that, the only other things that caught my eye are the missing outline on the ponytail and the clumsy mouth animation. The mouth hasn't been synched with the jaw properly. I recommend you look at Phoenix's spritesheet as reference for this.

Easy enough to fix this. There's actually a yellow hairband there, it's just so hard to see. Take a shade of yellow about four or five times darker than the hairband and do some shading on the bottom part. That should work.
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby Dypo deLina » Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:15 am

I meant that he's supposed to add an outline on his ponytail. I wasn't talking about the hairband, since most, if not all, should be hidden in the shadows. :)
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby Thursday » Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:32 am

Updated. Hopefully I've fixed all of the errors you guys pointed out :)
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby LunchPolice » Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:58 am

Sweet! I can't see any problems, now!
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby Thursday » Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:10 am

LunchPolice wrote:Sweet! I can't see any problems, now!


Thanks!! :larry:

Just finished Matt's "thinking" sprites. Took a while 'cause I had some trouble with the hand :|
If the hand doesn't look right, please say how I can fix it :wink:
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby paradoxinparticles » Wed Nov 24, 2010 6:58 am

I think we need to either see more or less of the hand, depending on how you want to work the pose. If you want to see how it SHOULD look, do the pose yourself and take a picture of it. The arm is too long, too; the elbow should point out more, right from the shoulder. I hope that helps.
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby Maxwest » Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:50 pm

Sorry if I am rude, but now it looks a little like he is talking through a phone...
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby Thursday » Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:18 am

Maxwest wrote:Sorry if I am rude, but now it looks a little like he is talking through a phone...


Heh yeah, I guess it does :lol:
Hopefully after I fix it, it looks more like he's resting his head on his hand.
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Re: Thursday's Sprite Gallery 

Postby FenrirDarkWolf » Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:45 am

I like the sprite, I really do, might I suggest recoloring his badge, silver or something, kinda like his buttons. On his thinking pose, I think we should see less of his arm and more of the white shirt underneath, compare to Edgeworth's arm.
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