Koda's World of Art (Requests Closed + Rainbow Dash DiS)

[Koda]

And this suddenly gives me the realization that I have never really done much of anything with Terry Fawles.

I have the weirdest compulsion to sprite right now.

I dont use him much either.

do you have any critiques on the sprite?

Yes. Yes I do.

Then surely you can post them? ~.~

[Mimi]

This is a character from Rendezvous, called Creed River.




mostly from scratch, with the exception of the camera which is partially Cody's, and iirc a bit of Terry Fawles in the face.

The neck is a little strange. I am referring to the brown lines in the middle. :O I don't think people actually have that. Also, as people have mentioned before, a little more wrinkling and curves can improve the sprite overall. It looks quite... linear, if you know what I mean.

Aside from that, I love the concept! I can definitely spot him and he carries that AA-uniquness. Keep it up!

[Lind]

I dont use him much either.

do you have any critiques on the sprite?

Yes. Yes I do.

Then surely you can post them? ~.~

Of course I can!

[Koda]

Good advice Mimi, I will try to fix those tomorrow.

and Lind, you're just being annoying and its not funny. =_= If you have something to say just say it, I don't care if you say it sucks or anything. I know I'm not a very good spriter already...

[Lind]

Oh no, it's good. Bit pillow-shaded, mind.

[Koda]

Oh no, it's good. Bit pillow-shaded, mind.

Maybe in that case adding more wrinkles will help fix that, as they allow for more advanced shading?

[Koda]

something I made for someone else...

[Phantom]

border frame detracts a bunch from the image, seems really low contrast

[TKinhonipei]

I personally think it looks wonderfully amazing, in a nutshell.

[Koda]

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I've never really tried making shading like this but I'm really happy with the result, all scratch except for the bottom on his left arm (from Klavier) I also made a few improvements

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old

better? also I kind of like the border...

[Lind]

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Old

I've never really tried making shading like this but I'm really happy with the result, all scratch except for the bottom on his left arm (from Klavier)

It's definitely an improvement, but now the scarf's shading is inconsistent with the arms. The scarf should get darker right at the top in the same place that the arms do.

Also, while the neck shading was very poor before, getting rid of it completely is just as bad. I'd recommend checking one of the canon sprites and trying to copy it down.

Oh, and the collar seems strange, like how it suddenly cuts off with no change in shading whatsoever.

[Koda]

alright. I will fix these. I want this sprite to be as good as it can be thank you.

[Phantom]

The mia thing got really better. Border still detracts a bunch from the image.

[GordonVance]

Hey Koda. GV here. could you please do a detective sprite with elvis hair. THNX. If you could add boxart i will give you mass credit.
P.S. could i use the guys sprite of whom i put below.

[enigma]

Dude. It say's requests closed. Hence, requests are not open. >_<