Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!
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Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!
Deleted all the rubbish sprites.
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Art
Looks good, 'specially the Celeste one
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Art
By the way I know the Diego one is really ugly I used the eyes of his co-council sprite
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Art
I must say, I'm quite flattered I'm your inspiration. Now for some critiques:
Inpax: I must say, it's quite good, except a few of the colors seemed to be wrongly colored though, plus you missed a shade of blue.
Bullard: You missed a bit of orange from Grossberg's suit, plus could you shade according to the shades on the original sprite? Also, never use pure black, use a dark violet or blue.
Pearl: If you could recolor and edit the eyes a bit, it would look even better on both!
Diego: Again, missed shades, also, you could use Diego as a color base for the hair. The faces needs to be fixed a whole lot, I suggest restarting this one, perhaps not using his whole face but just the eye off of his profile sprite. The arm looks strange as well.
Prince: The head looks really weird. Plus the suit's colors are a bit bright and hard on the eyes. Also, more missed shades, plus you could recolor the hand to match the head's skin color.
Gumshoe: Not much to say, I quite like this one.
Overall, I have the feeling you're a beginner.
Inpax: I must say, it's quite good, except a few of the colors seemed to be wrongly colored though, plus you missed a shade of blue.
Bullard: You missed a bit of orange from Grossberg's suit, plus could you shade according to the shades on the original sprite? Also, never use pure black, use a dark violet or blue.
Pearl: If you could recolor and edit the eyes a bit, it would look even better on both!
Diego: Again, missed shades, also, you could use Diego as a color base for the hair. The faces needs to be fixed a whole lot, I suggest restarting this one, perhaps not using his whole face but just the eye off of his profile sprite. The arm looks strange as well.
Prince: The head looks really weird. Plus the suit's colors are a bit bright and hard on the eyes. Also, more missed shades, plus you could recolor the hand to match the head's skin color.
Gumshoe: Not much to say, I quite like this one.
Overall, I have the feeling you're a beginner.
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Art
I am quite new to spriting but thank you for your comments
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Art
Pretty Nice. I would say some critiquing, but buddyfaith already took everything I was going to say.
I think that for a starter, these are pretty good. Keep working on it!
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!
David Radcliffe: Apart from the weird head XD
I say I find it cool how his right hand is pale and small, and his left is huge and dark.
I say I find it cool how his right hand is pale and small, and his left is huge and dark.
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!
Wuh oh time to edit
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!
Police Trucy's not bad The shirt just needs outlines, and the shading needs some fixing.
So... Godot got drunk off of Phoenix's grape juice?
So... Godot got drunk off of Phoenix's grape juice?
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!
Thursday wrote:Police Trucy's not bad The shirt just needs outlines, and the shading needs some fixing.
So... Godot got drunk off of Phoenix's grape juice?
Thanks for your comments !
I will try and fix Police Trucy
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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!
Just to check. Are you still part of the Puzzles Enigma art team?