Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!

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Re: Phoenix-Fantic's Sprite Shoppe!

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PF.
That police trucy is probably your best sprite here.
Radcliffe's head is driving me bonkers!
Pearls head is a bit to young looking on that body.Just saying.
On Franziska's recolor some of the old color is still showing as well.
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So I was bored so I decided to make an AA styled boxart of Ocarina of Time:
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I have made another boxart but i'm not going to show that yet... :wink:
So I'm pretty proud of this So i'm now accepting Boxart Requests! :D
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Using black to fill in the boxart is probably not the best idea.
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Sorry, but you still need a TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON of improvement before you start taking requests, sorry. =(
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I agree. Also, you're missing the ESRB and Nintendo logos :wink:
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Don't use Windows Paint to make boxart. There's a noticeable lack of anti-alias on each image from Paint's or a similar style of scaling and skewing. But it's a nice try. I can't wait to see what you can come up with next. :wink:
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nudalman wrote:Sorry, but you still need a TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON of improvement before you start taking requests, sorry. =(
*clears throat* Sorry Nudal, but... what did I say about being subtle again?
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Thank you guys for your tips :)
I'll make another one and hopefully it'll turn out better!
Thanks :D
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Dypo deLuna wrote:
nudalman wrote:Sorry, but you still need a TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON of improvement before you start taking requests, sorry. =(
*clears throat* Sorry Nudal, but... what did I say about being subtle again?
Lol, sorry Sissel if I hurt your feelings, I'll try to be more "subtle" in the future. :XD:
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nudalman wrote:
Dypo deLuna wrote:
nudalman wrote:Sorry, but you still need a TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON of improvement before you start taking requests, sorry. =(
*clears throat* Sorry Nudal, but... what did I say about being subtle again?
Lol, sorry Sissel if I hurt your feelings, I'll try to be more "subtle" in the future. :XD:
Don't worry :)
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Made this in ten minutes.
It's not that good.
Maybe I'll use him in classroom lawyer.
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On the contrary. It looks like one of your more better Sprites. The only real problem is the hair, which needs to be shaded more.
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Thanks! :D I'll work on it! Meanwhile I made this also :
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I know the shading is of but it's a W.I.P.
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Phoenix Fanatic wrote:Thanks! :D I'll work on it! Meanwhile, I made this, also :
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I know the shading is off, but it's a W.I.P.
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Wooperboy60 wrote:
Spoiler : Grammar Nazi :
Phoenix Fanatic wrote:Thanks! :D I'll work on it! Meanwhile, I made this, also :
robot.png
I know the shading is off, but it's a W.I.P.
Completely Scratched :mrgreen:
Hey!! How dare you steal my grammar nazism gimmick?! :x

Lol nah, I kid. :cute:

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Staying on-topic, here's some crit:
  • The robot looks rather flat, it doesn't look very 3D at all.
  • The shading is rather weird, because it looks as though it was meant for organic shapes even though robots really aren't organic at all...
  • The design isn't too shabby, but a few more details here and there would really add to it. ;)
  • It would also help to have a few more different shades to make it look more legitimate. The lighting is weird too, now that I think about it.
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