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Thursday wrote:The hair turned out great :D
Thanks. For some reason the sprite is bugging me-it doesn't look larry enough...
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I think perhaps the nose and expression are what doesn't make it completely like Larry, however, it is still a good sprite.

One suggestion that I have is that the jaw is too diagonal and lacks anti-aliasing.
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nudalman wrote:I think perhaps the nose and expression are what doesn't make it completely like Larry, however, it is still a good sprite.

One suggestion that I have is that the jaw is too diagonal and lacks anti-aliasing.
Larry's jaw is like that.
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I disagree; take a look at Larry's jaw and you will find both shape and anti-aliasing.
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Is this shirt position good? I want to know before I add any more.
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Yes! The shirt looks MUCH better. Couple of here-and-there's, but nothing too important. (To me anyway :calisto:)
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Larry Butz: Awful Attorney at your service!
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Fix the top right square (because it looks like it converges instead of being parallel to the others) and you're set for the rest of that set of sprites. ;)
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It looks much better now. Good luck with the whole sheet :wink:
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Day 2 - Trial COMPLETE and Playable now!
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E.D.Revolution wrote:Fix the top right square (because it looks like it converges instead of being parallel to the others) and you're set for the rest of that set of sprites. ;)
OK, thanks. Anything else I should change?

Also, Happy Birthday, I just noticed.
Thursday wrote:It looks much better now. Good luck with the whole sheet :wink:
Thanks!
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That is much better. :)
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All sprites redone, in OP! Can someone make .gifs?

Also, how should I put in the talking sprites into the editor, Talk1, Talk2, Talk1, Blink2, Blink3, Blink2, Talk1?
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Very nice sprites. But I would use the mid-blinking sprite as the normal sprite, to give a lazy feeling to the sprite. Otherwise, superb :)
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How does this look for evidence? I was at first going to remove the hand behind his head and instead as the start up sprites, make him turn the paper upside down, but it was too hard to do. Its still a WIP.

Anyway, I took phoenix's happy/embarrased and phoenix's evidence sprites and spliced them with larry's.
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Wow this looks really good :D
The only thing I would change is his face:
If he got his hand behind his head then he must be nervous, or confused.
Try it.
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