My Debut = Random Attorney

[Paul Cresset]

My debut in Ace Attorney sprites, The Random Attorney =3



Enjoy =3

[Godot Mango]

... That's...
Great. *nod*
Really nice. Good work...

[Paul Cresset]

Random Attorney Stand without Glasses



Random Attorney Stand with glasses

[Godot Mango]

Hair is only one color.
glasses could use work.
But, again, good.

[Wooper]

Well, for a beginner, they're pretty good, but...

Top One:
-Hair looks really...off. I don't know why, but it just doesn't look right to me.
-There's a random white pixel in his hair.
-The hands lack outline and are not the same color as the face

Attorney ones:
-They don't look hardly anything like the front sprite. Maybe change the face a bit?
-The hair on both of them are completely void of shading. You should fix that.
-Again, Payne's hand needs different shading.
-The glasses are a bit...indescribable. Look at young klavier's to see how it should look.

Those sprites, even though they may need work, are quite good for a beginner! Keep up the good work!

[lazyplague]

Pretty much what wooper boy and Mango said.
But that is wonderful for a first sprite!

[Koda]

Pretty good for a start. However, it can me much better if you make the defense version and witness version look like each other. I will show you some areas where you can do that.

- The Palette: Try to use identical colour palettes. Right now, it looks like two different uniforms.

- The Lapels: The front sprites, have pointed lapels, while the defence ones are regular.

- The Hair: They look nothing alike, and both look pretty messy.