hershel_layton's Art (Maria Ushiromiya! Taking Requests!)

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I think I fixed it... I dunno, something still seems wrong about it.
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Maybe perhaps the bikini isn't round enough?
Try really shaping the top around the chest (of the original sprite), it seems a bit too flat.
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I'm not really sure what you mean, but I took another shot at it and..... (In comparison with the first try)
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Hmm... I seem to be having this rather tedious issue of your images not hotlinking. All I see is a default image icon, and when I right-click, it takes me to an intermediary page of shorts. For example, this is what it shows up for me as:

Image, in comparison with the hotlink, which is working fine for me if I put it in manually.

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What an odd bug... This is one of the reasons I strongly advocate the use of IMGBoot. Not once have I had any image issues with them! :)

On the matter of sprites, I think the main reason why Ema looks particularly jarring is because of how disproportionate she is. I've lined Bikini!Ema up with her AJ!sprite... :?

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Still, some nice sprites here!
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Thank you for bringing that to my attention! I will fix that soon and (if Alnar wishes) will re-upload the sprites he requested.
So that's what was wrong with her! I should've done that in the first place. :D

Thank You for the compliment!! If you have any sprite suggestions, I would love to hear them!
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Final version. I've worked out what was wrong!
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Sure, you can reupload the sprites I requested.

Cammy looks perfect now, great job! :D
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Pleas i need sprites for a fan series i wanna do. Pleas pleas pleas and ill give you credit and a virtual cookie! (=3)

Sprites i need:


Roy Escobar (Main Character)
Hair: Blood red,Spiky
Age:20
Suit color: Silver Grey
Occupation: Lawyer
Bio: He began his career as a lawyer when he saw how Phoenix wright solved murder cases with perfection (NintendoLP style)
so he became a lawyer to follow in his foot steps.He'as also vary short and mistaken as a child until people see his little mustache.
Pic: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/ ... 5gw7lm.jpg

Thomas Malvrick (Jerkish Prosecutor)
Hair: Orange,Spiky
Age:20
Suit color: Burgundy
Occupation: Prosecutor
Bio: Thomas is Roy's bitter rival and will do anything to get a guilty verdict if he's up against roy. He's the same size as roy and also mistaken as a child.
Pic: http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/ ... 5gx7ka.jpg

Detective Rachel (Roy's Maya)
Hair: Bubble gum Pink, Long
Suit: Police uniform
Occupation: Detective
Bio: Is a skilled detective but can be a little out there.Loves the color pink and likes to be near Roy and she's of normal size (taller than Roy and Thomas)
Pic: Up to you.
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I'm sorry, but I can't design a sprite with this kind of material. Maybe try someone else? Anyhow, I have created a sprite based on the information provided for the last sprite (Roy's Maya.) Hope this helps!
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If you ask me i say you did great! :sawhit: (=3) :awesome:
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I'm no spriter or artist, but I think it's pretty darn good the hair seems a bit too bright and could use better shading I think. The color of pink you're using seems a bit too hot,I don't know if you intended that or not but that's just me.
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I actually like the hot pink color for the sprite. :D
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Could you specify which part of the hair seems wrong to you? Is this colour better?
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I do like this one better, but it seems the hair doesn't blend into the face as well as I think it should. But I dunno :/
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Re: hershel_layton's Art (Bikini People!! Taking Requests!)

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May I use the Bikini Ema sprite?
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