O.k. Lets get this started.
I have created this thread as a place to place my short
stories that I have written for school assignments.
I haven't had the time to make story writing my hobby,
but I am hoping to get some feedback on my writing, and
more importantly, to get actual critism.
Short Story #1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G8L ... ?hl=en_GB#
This story is based off of Edgar Allen Poe's A Tell-Tale Heart.
For this assignment, we had to tell the story from a diffrent perspective.
Any comments would be greatly cherished.
The originial story by Edgar Allen Poe can be found here http://www.literature.org/authors/poe-e ... heart.html
Happy reading.
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"Curiously enough, the only thing that went through the mind of the bowl of petunias as it fell was Oh no, not again. Many people have speculated that if we knew exactly why the bowl of petunias had thought that we would know a lot more about the nature of the Universe than we do now."
