Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 7)

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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby Drey Wilkins » Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:13 am

Drey Wilkins wrote:The first shot was fired from one of the WRO soldiers. Vincent grimaced. It would have been better for him to take the first shot. He wouldn't miss.

He aimed and pulled the trigger twice
One Deepground soldier fell, his head exploding in a shower of blood and brain-matter, while the other keeled over as the three revolver shells slammed into his gut ripping his internal organs to shreds.

Vincent looked around. a third DG was down, and one of the WRO troops had dropped. A lucky break for the WRO soldiers to be doing this well.
He fired three times, and two soldiers dropped, While the three remaining soldiers moved for cover.

Vincent Fired again, and yet again, until each soldier was down and not moving.

"Check their vitals." The Squad Sargent ordered two of the soldiers, while Vincent approached the white Robot. "And what the hell is that thing?"

Vincent ignored him, stepping closer to the skeletal robot.
On it's left side was the black letters: GLaDOS, while in the center of it's chest was a swivelling eye, which did not have a colour, as he would have expected.

The robot did not react to him in any way, apart from two metallic words.
"Vincent. Valentine.?"
He nodded slowly.
The robot nodded in return. "You. Have. Been. Summoned.."

And with those words, it grasped Vincent's golden claw-glove, producing a small metal cylinder with it's other hand, and pressing the button on it's top.

There was a flash of light, and they were gone.

***

Vincent's eyes stung. He could see nothing but a wall of white.
Slowly, the light faded, and Vincent was able to see where he was.

He was on a train, rolling through the countryside towards a small city that squatted on the horizon.
The train was clean, furnished with metal, while right beside Vincent sat large Metal Briefcase. On the other side sat the Robot that had brought him.
"What is this?"
"Crossover. Central.. One. Of. Our. Ranks. Has. Found. Their. Way. Home.. You. Will. Inherit. What. She. Left. Behind.." It pointed at the briefcase, which Vincent picked up and opened.
Inside was the deed to a house, and 1000 'dollars' - A green note with a number on it.

"Dollars?"
"The. Currency. Of. This. Dimension.. It. Is. Identical. To. Gil. In. Every. Way."

Vincent frowned thoughtfully as they started to approach the city.
"So why am I here?"


This is where I first described GLaDOS in any real way. It describes her as being like P-Body, with 'GLaDOS' printed on one side. In this, her eye has no color, but when GLaDOS is in the body, the eye turns orange.
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby ShadowEdgeworth » Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:06 am

I've already edited it, don't worry. Less humanoid, slightly more like a p-body, with a hint of Metal Sonic.

Anyway, Part 3 will be up in a matter of minutes. ;)
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby enigma » Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:36 am

Wow! This is getting better all the time. :nod:
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby LunchPolice » Fri Dec 23, 2011 2:35 am

Nice work, SE. I've enjoyed every part so far. :D
Can't wait to see what it's like once you've introduced all the characters.
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby Drey Wilkins » Fri Dec 23, 2011 3:25 am

YAY. THIS IS DA BEST.

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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby Master Of Chaos » Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:26 am

Your good at keeping them in character. I hope you do a better job with Norman then I do.
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby LunchPolice » Fri Dec 23, 2011 12:47 pm

So what's up with your Sonic continuity, anyway? It has Mobius AND Earth?
How come the main characters are on Earth, and Sally's on Mobius? Did you make Sonic X canon or something?
And merge it with the original Sonic cartoon?
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby ShadowEdgeworth » Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:51 pm

Thanks guys! Glad you're liking it. :)

@LP- Ah, I knew someone would ask that. Well, I'm counting SatAM as canon, and I've incoperated the "brought-to-Earth" aspect of Sonic X, just with 100% less Chris. Basically...

Sonic 1, 2, CD, 3
SatAM
"Brought-To-Earth"
Sonic Adventure 1 & 2
Sonic Heroes
Shadow the Hedgehog
Sonic Rush
Sonic Rivals
Sonic Unleashed
Sonic Rush 2
Sonic Rivals 2
Sonic Colours
Sonic Generations
Crossed Paths

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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby Remilia Scarlet » Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:41 am

Looks like the first instances of copy/paste are upon us. Understandable but a little disappointing. There was switching between the third and first person in the beginning of Marth's scene. Also Kazooie is the only one not alluded to in the title for some reason. Something like "Animals and more swords" would be an easy fix, don't you think? On a more personal note, I have a hatred for Sally so I didn't like her being mentioned but that's not exactly a flaw. Probably the weakest chapter so far but don't get me wrong from all the nitpicks, the introductions of both Sonic and Shadow were well written and left a much stronger impression on me than their original introductions did. The interaction between Eggman and Dubsy is intriguing me too for some reason.
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby ShadowEdgeworth » Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:38 pm

Hey let's see you trying to improve a GuardianDreamer post without sustaining too much of a mental block. It just ain't possible. :P

But yeah, a few problems is that I'm completely unfamilar with some of the characters, such as Kazooie. Still, once all the introductions are complete, C&P will be at a mimimum. :)
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby LunchPolice » Sun Dec 25, 2011 5:35 am

In your continuity we're assuming Eggman had his canon design during SatAM?
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby ShadowEdgeworth » Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:31 pm

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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby GuardianDreamer » Sun Dec 25, 2011 6:33 pm

ShadowEdgeworth wrote:Hey let's see you trying to improve a GuardianDreamer post without sustaining too much of a mental block. It just ain't possible. :P

But yeah, a few problems is that I'm completely unfamilar with some of the characters, such as Kazooie. Still, once all the introductions are complete, C&P will be at a mimimum. :)

I'm flattered... no, really, I am. Not exactly sure how I should respond to that. Anyway, I am still reading this, but I'm not exactly sure how to comment. I'm more of the kind of person who comments rarely. And it's understandable that you don't know about some of the characters. Marth himself has been portrayed 3 different ways in all the games he's been in(all of them with similarities) so I mixed them all up. Like I said a long time ago, don't hesitate to PM me if you need help keeping him in-character.
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby ShadowEdgeworth » Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:57 pm

GuardianDreamer wrote:
ShadowEdgeworth wrote:Hey let's see you trying to improve a GuardianDreamer post without sustaining too much of a mental block. It just ain't possible. :P

But yeah, a few problems is that I'm completely unfamilar with some of the characters, such as Kazooie. Still, once all the introductions are complete, C&P will be at a mimimum. :)

I'm flattered... no, really, I am. Not exactly sure how I should respond to that. Anyway, I am still reading this, but I'm not exactly sure how to comment. I'm more of the kind of person who comments rarely. And it's understandable that you don't know about some of the characters. Marth himself has been portrayed 3 different ways in all the games he's been in(all of them with similarities) so I mixed them all up. Like I said a long time ago, don't hesitate to PM me if you need help keeping him in-character.


I definately will do that once we get into the more... character intensive areas. That's when everything will get complicated, aha...

Anyway! Part 4 is here! :D
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Re: Crossed Paths ~ The Crossover Central Novelisation (Part 

Postby LunchPolice » Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:15 am

Nice work. I like how you explained Vegeta's strength, his evilness, and the meteor. Very good.
I love the interaction between Dubsy and Dr Eggman.

Dark Super Sonic, huh? I think I've heard of that. It's from Sonic X, right?

... Wait what happened to Vegeta's dog Zac? I know it's not from DBZ, but scrapping Zac
is just sad! You TOOK AWAY HIS DOG YOU JERK
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