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Re: My first AA style Sprite!

Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 4:14 am
by morganwk
Is the mouth alright? I can't find a nice, flat mouth to franken.
Oh and about the
really weird and sharp change of shadow in the middle
does it still have that? I honestly didn't even notice a problem the first time.

I also plan to make the jacket less shiny, and for the left flap to go under the right flap a bit, like in real suit jackets.

What about a bowtie to complete the "secret agent" feel?

Re: My first AA style Sprite!

Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:18 am
by Lind
morganwk wrote:What about a bowtie to complete the "secret agent" feel?
I was focusing on the technical spriting rather than character design... but yeah, now that you mention it, his design is a tad bland. Something like a bowtie might be a good idea.
morganwk wrote:Is the mouth alright? I can't find a nice, flat mouth to franken.
The mouth isn't bad, but it could definitely stand to be better.


Tell you what... with your permission, I could make an image pointing out the small details that need work.

Re: My first AA style Sprite!

Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 7:56 am
by morganwk
Go for it.

Re: Morganwk's sprites (use with permission I guess)

Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 9:34 pm
by morganwk
This topic now houses all of my art.