Since I decided that I have a ways to go before I can make a complete story with the trial creator, I instead decided to make a short (Or long) webcomicy thing for you all. So far, here is a cover/ teaser thing for your pleasure.
When a new page is released this topic will be edited to include it. I hope you enjoy!
Everything past this point is comic page
Also, something I forgot to mention: Critiques are very, very welcome. If I get ANYTHING wrong about Phoenix pleeeeease tell me. Then I can fix it.
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First Page
Second Page
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Fourth Page (OH GOD PHOENIX'S HAIR WHAT IS EVEN)(Okay edited. It's not a very good edit but I hope it clears up some confusion)
Bonus Pagey thinger (This is to make the introductions seem less fast. It won't COMPLETELY fix it, but I hope it helps a little)
Fifth Page (A wild detective appears! AND HIS FACE IS A BASEBALL)
Sixth Page (A.K.A. the page where I finally decide it's okay to draw sill faces)
Seventh Page
Eighth Page (Phoenix has had enough with the smug prosecutors.)
Ninth Page ( I don't have anything funny to say about this page)
Tenth Page ( OH GOD I AM SO SORRY FOR THIS TERRIBLE BLOOD WILL YOU EVER FORGIVE ME.)
Eleventh Page (Now kids, don't make fun of the forensics man because of his dot eyes. He has a soul too)
Twelfth Page (THE FORENSICS MAN! HE DOES HAVE EYES! whaaaaaaaaaaaat)(Also, I'm not normally one to compliment myself... but I really like how I did Phoenix's face in that last panel)
Thirteenth Page (Y'know... I had to think really hard about what really goes down in Phoenix's head when he's about to meet a client.)
Here's a special break from our usual program to display a younger Devin Ridet. CHECKIT
And now back to our regular scheduling
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20th page WOOHOO!
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