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Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby alphemo » Thu May 31, 2012 4:49 am

Reformatting!

I have the old sprites saved, so here's a composite of all of the new ones since I did this totally incorrectly when I first began the thread. :oops: I'm going to post Edgeworth and Franziska in the free use topic and see if anyone wants them, but here they are for your use! I just ask that you please don't use Elizabeth yet, as I still need to work on her hair and some jumpy sprites.

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Young Edgeworth (I'm willing to do the body for free use if asked, I just don't need it):
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Young Franziska (same with her other sprites):
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Elizabeth:
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Last edited by alphemo on Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:03 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Turnabout Redemption, Part 1: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=37747

An AU where Phoenix's letters to Edgeworth inspire some less-than-holy behavior from the Catholic Edgeworth and von Karmas...

Part 2 is still in the beginning stages and features custom sprites of Edgeworth and Franziska!
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Re: Critique on Youngling!Edgeworth Sprite 

Postby The Canadian Judge » Thu May 31, 2012 2:21 pm

Well, let's compare it to a real photo of young Miles.

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Yup, I see a difference between the two pictures.
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Re: Critique on Youngling!Edgeworth Sprite 

Postby puchi » Thu May 31, 2012 3:39 pm

Hmm.., is he wearing a cravat? Do you intend him to be Von-karma household age? Because if he is, he definitely looks too young. He looks below 8 years old, maybe you can make the eyes smaller if that's the case. Also his eyebrow looks a bit too thick, his hair too.

And..I don't know, his body looks super small to me. Maybe you can make some part of the shoulders visible? Or you can make the head a bit smaller.

I'm not a professional though, this is just my thoughts. And although something do looks a bit off, but he's a cutie and the sprite is great XD.
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Re: Critique on Youngling!Edgeworth Sprite 

Postby alphemo » Thu May 31, 2012 4:47 pm

I think the body comment is it. I'll definitely repair that. He's supposed to be twelve, so I'll fiddle with the eyes and see what happens. I haven't played the very first AA game, but he's supposed to have just arrived at von Karma's (so we'll say it's AU if that doesn't work--I don't want to mess up time). Thanks for the compliment, though!

And not to be rude, but of course there's a difference. lol

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Updated body dimensions (still fixing coat--current one is a placeholder)

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Turnabout Redemption, Part 1: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=37747

An AU where Phoenix's letters to Edgeworth inspire some less-than-holy behavior from the Catholic Edgeworth and von Karmas...

Part 2 is still in the beginning stages and features custom sprites of Edgeworth and Franziska!
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Alphemo's Sprites: Progress on young!Franziska (Spoilers JFA 

Postby alphemo » Fri Jun 01, 2012 5:02 pm

Spoiler : :
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Really, all I need for the normal sprite is the head and shoulders--which is part of why I've done nothing on the body apart from the bow and right arm. Everything is still being reworked, including the hair, bow (DEAR LORD THE BOW) and face, and I also need to change her skin color to the original Franziska's coloration, but this is what I have so far. I hate the chunkiness of the hair by her face--that'll likely be the first thing fixed after I post--her left eyelid is too strong, the smile (which shouldn't take long, honestly) is too short, et cetera... I have a lot to do, and it's discouraging. I figure that this might garner me some help on where to go from here, however, so here it is.

Looks better if you click on it, by the way.

After this comes crying!young!Franziska.
Turnabout Redemption, Part 1: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=37747

An AU where Phoenix's letters to Edgeworth inspire some less-than-holy behavior from the Catholic Edgeworth and von Karmas...

Part 2 is still in the beginning stages and features custom sprites of Edgeworth and Franziska!
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Re: Critique on Youngling!Edgeworth Sprite 

Postby Tap » Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:28 am

Per the rules of the 'Your Art' forum, I've merged "Alphemo's Sprites: Progress on young!Franziska (Spoilers JFA)" into the first sprite thread you created: "You must showcase your art* in a single topic entitled with your username." :)
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby alphemo » Sun Jun 03, 2012 4:59 am

Progress on an OC. Currently named Elizabeth. Still a lot of work to do on everything, but here's how she's coming along!

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I wish I had stuff from when I sprited as a 13-year-old. I had quite a portfolio, but I deleted all of it. Anyway, any critique, even though things aren't anywhere near done, is very appreciated!
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Part 2 is still in the beginning stages and features custom sprites of Edgeworth and Franziska!
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby Lind » Sun Jun 03, 2012 7:00 pm

Looks good, but I strongly recommend some frankenspriting. Right now she's clearly just an Alita edit.
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby alphemo » Sun Jun 03, 2012 7:40 pm

Actually, I came here to showcase some of that on my young Edgeworth, funnily enough. He looks MUCH better now. I've accepted that I'm pretty mediocre at spriting.

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She's up next. I'll have to think about who to frankensprite her with, though...

Thanks!
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby Wolf Speaker » Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:02 pm

MUCH better. It actually does look like him now.
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby alphemo » Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:04 pm

Thanks! Downloading GIMP again was a huge help. I actually decided Franziska should be next up--I'm completely starting over on her.

Speaking of, here she is:

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Turnabout Redemption, Part 1: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=37747

An AU where Phoenix's letters to Edgeworth inspire some less-than-holy behavior from the Catholic Edgeworth and von Karmas...

Part 2 is still in the beginning stages and features custom sprites of Edgeworth and Franziska!
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby alphemo » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:39 pm

Elizabeth 2.0!

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She still looks kind of sloppy, but it's a start!

EDIT: I AM going to darken the hair, but today was an animation kind of day. :fran:

So much stuff to do!!
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Turnabout Redemption, Part 1: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=37747

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Part 2 is still in the beginning stages and features custom sprites of Edgeworth and Franziska!
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby Wolf Speaker » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:48 pm

It's nice, for the most part, but you really need to outline and shade her hair darker. It's just blinding right now.
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby alphemo » Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:41 pm

You think so? I was afraid of it getting TOO dark, but I'll try it.
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Re: Alphemo's Sprites (Spoilers JFA) 

Postby TKinhonipei » Tue Jun 05, 2012 12:21 am

I'm so envious, I wish I could sprite as good as you.

So far, I'm a fan! I look forward to future works by your hand. ^_^
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