Yuneia's Sprites! First Timer *Blushing Meredith 09/13*

[Kroki]

Make a game.

[Ami]

Good work! Can't say how good these are. The only real question I have is this-

Since I don't know the context of her pose that's against the backdrop of a wooded area, I may be wrong, but her stage right hand seems to be trying to grip her arm, but most of her hand is about four "inches" from the forearm, the edge of her hand and pinky are against it. I'm probably seeing this wrong, though. Or is it correct, but purposeful? I'm not sure.

[Yuneia]

She's getting sadder and sadder as new sprites are revealed... ;_;

They are still great though. xD

LOL! Guess she's a pretty sad character, but she will have more happier sprites hopefully. @ w @

Make a game.

xDDD I think I already mentioned that I have no idea how too.
Not only that, I don't have any other idea's yet for cases and such.

Good work! Can't say how good these are. The only real question I have is this-

Since I don't know the context of her pose that's against the backdrop of a wooded area, I may be wrong, but her stage right hand seems to be trying to grip her arm, but most of her hand is about four "inches" from the forearm, the edge of her hand and pinky are against it. I'm probably seeing this wrong, though. Or is it correct, but purposeful? I'm not sure.

I know what you mean and to be honest I guess it's hard to explain.
For some reason, every time I try griping hands they always seem to come out a little strange looking.
She is suppose to be trying to grip her arm but not as well. Idk, it'll probably need to be fixed again in the future though I'm sure. @ w @

[Mimi]

She's getting sadder and sadder as new sprites are revealed... ;_;

They are still great though. xD

So true.

I predict the next one will be her completely broken down.

[Yuneia]

She's getting sadder and sadder as new sprites are revealed... ;_;

They are still great though. xD

So true.

I predict the next one will be her completely broken down.

Haha, maybe? Maybe not, I dunno yet. Haven't thought it up @ w @
I might put some more happier sprites in there eventually.

Also as an update, if you look on the first page under Meredith there are new talking sprites and also some scenes. :3
I love whoever made the background packages. I was surprised to see many backgrounds I could use for her. 8D

[Yuneia]

Blah, I feel so slow lately, I dunno why to be honest. ;;
But whateverz I figured to work on a new sprite today to keep me busy til later = w =
Can anyone maybe guess who she's gonna be? ;3 Get it right and win a cookie ~



Well she's finished now ~
Reminds me how I don't really like doing forward sprites = w =
Ah well ~ I think she came out alright anyways @ w @

[Shino]

Well she's finished now ~
Reminds me how I don't really like doing forward sprites = w =
Ah well ~ She came out absolutely amazing and perfect and fabulous and splendiferrific @ w @

;D

[Kroki]

She's not as good, (well I don't like her look anyway but) she is severly missing shading, namely on the face and the cleavage, for instance the braid's shadow is on it's right only while the light seems to come from the front : it should visible on it's left too. Also her neck is really, really weird u_U, the little line should be more in the middle like :

[Yuneia]

She's not as good, (well I don't like her look anyway but) she is severly missing shading, namely on the face and the cleavage, for instance the braid's shadow is on it's right only while the light seems to come from the front : it should visible on it's left too. Also her neck is really, really weird u_U, the little line should be more in the middle like :

Not to sound rude, but mainly just to defend my sprite :3
There is not suppose to be cleavage shadow because you do not understand her outfit.
The white is a shirt and over top that shirt is a dress with no sleeves. (hence the shirt is the sleeves.)
There is no cleavage shadow, for it would not appear at all with how her outfit is layered.
If you wear a long sleeved white shirt and then something over that, you would not be able to see down their chest.
Also, there is nothing there to make that shadow that you placed there.

As for the lighting, it's not from the front completely. It is mid - front to mid - left.
But I can probably still add some shadow to the braid even so.

As for her collar bone, it only looks wrong because most people don't know female anatomy. |3
While some collar bones might look like you have it, it actually looks like this.
Again, not to sound rude, just to point out my way of thinking? |D

[Kroki]

Your collar bone is still way too far on the left. x)
Anyway, boobs or not, I was mainly talking about the braid, it should really leave a shadow on the left side. As for the face... It's really flat, I find it ugly, a darker shade and some more shadow around the nose/right-side would not be a luxury.
I don't like dolls, so that's not helping U_U, but I really think there is a problem.

[Yuneia]

Your collar bone is still way too far on the left. x)
Anyway, boobs or not, I was mainly talking about the braid, it should really leave a shadow on the left side. As for the face... It's really flat, I find it ugly, a darker shade and some more shadow around the nose/right-side would not be a luxury.
I don't like dolls, so that's not helping U_U, but I really think there is a problem.

Oh, she has boobs, but the clothing she is wearing is rather baggy, therefore, doesn't show it as well.
Ah well, I like her the way she is even if I agree that her nose seems off to me.
She's not getting anymore sprites anyways considering she's dead. xD
I made her simply for a flashback scene under Meredith on the first post and that's all really ~ lawl

[Yuneia]

Some new blushing Meredith sprites with a smile. :3
No new pose, but eh whatever ~
Also, full body below that I'm working on now.

[Mimi]

I love your sprites. They are so beautiful and so... professional looking!

[Yuneia]

I love your sprites. They are so beautiful and so... professional looking!

And I luuurv you're avatar because I love Johan. |D
So every time I see a post by you it makes me a little happier inside ~ lmfao! <3

[Phantom]

I preferred the original way the collarbone was drawn (but it's not extended to the left so it reaches the shirt so it looks VERY weird).

The new one looks worse, a collarbone doesn't look like that.


Also what cleavage? :s