Why? I don't think they are that awesome. I'm more happy about that you find my story interesting.
Edit: Do you find anything particular to comment on? I would be happy to have some more commentary.
Dataman's Artie Threadie
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- ~Dataman~
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Re: Dataman's Artie Threadie - Merrily taking requests!
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Anime is awesome! Watch my Anime Sword Techniques series in my Youtube channel! Currently I have covered Gatotsu, Yontoryu, Santoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin and more is coming!
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Anime is awesome! Watch my Anime Sword Techniques series in my Youtube channel! Currently I have covered Gatotsu, Yontoryu, Santoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin and more is coming!
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Re: Dataman's Artie Threadie - Merrily taking requests!
Well, I guess the guy on the center needs to be shaded more. I would tell you to improve on the anatomy, but that might be just me and sometimes I do make little mess ups on the anatomy when trying to draw. I am going to improve on that as well. Another thing would be to wire poses. I've learned from a fellow artist on the Etrian Odyssey forum, Into the Labyrinth's Golden Deer Pub, that using a reference from real life will help you a lot in making characters look realistic.~Dataman~ wrote:Why? I don't think they are that awesome. I'm more happy about that you find my story interesting.
Edit: Do you find anything particular to comment on? I would be happy to have some more commentary.
But overall, your composition is growing strong.
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This is the page where one of the story's main evils makes a clear appereance for first time.
He is named Slasher. (I don't always make evils but when I do, I can't come up with uncliche name) It's possible his name real name is different, though, but everyone uses that name.
He's skilled swordsman with curved blades and knives. He's known for his brutality and the fact he seems to be unable to speak. That makes him write in walls or papers where someone other can read his words and let everyone know what he's thinking. He writes in english, which troubles Carolina when Nick's not around.
He always wears this strange orange mask with four blue ribbons and an additional part which resembles tear.
He is named Slasher. (I don't always make evils but when I do, I can't come up with uncliche name) It's possible his name real name is different, though, but everyone uses that name.
He's skilled swordsman with curved blades and knives. He's known for his brutality and the fact he seems to be unable to speak. That makes him write in walls or papers where someone other can read his words and let everyone know what he's thinking. He writes in english, which troubles Carolina when Nick's not around.
He always wears this strange orange mask with four blue ribbons and an additional part which resembles tear.
My DeviantArt My Youtube Channel
Anime is awesome! Watch my Anime Sword Techniques series in my Youtube channel! Currently I have covered Gatotsu, Yontoryu, Santoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin and more is coming!
My Art Thread
Anime is awesome! Watch my Anime Sword Techniques series in my Youtube channel! Currently I have covered Gatotsu, Yontoryu, Santoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin and more is coming!
My Art Thread
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Re: Dataman's Artie Threadie - Merrily taking requests!
YOOOO! Interesting idea! And the eyes look really strong here!~Dataman~ wrote:This is the page where one of the story's main evils makes a clear appereance for first time.
He is named Slasher. (I don't always make evils but when I do, I can't come up with uncliche name) It's possible his name real name is different, though, but everyone uses that name.
He's skilled swordsman with curved blades and knives. He's known for his brutality and the fact he seems to be unable to speak. That makes him write in walls or papers where someone other can read his words and let everyone know what he's thinking. He writes in english, which troubles Carolina when Nick's not around.
He always wears this strange orange mask with four blue ribbons and an additional part which resembles tear.
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Hi guys, I haven't been so active, but here's something nice and new, a drawing tutorial.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=850pDTx ... e=youtu.be
I can make this a longer series. Feel free to ask questions for me to answer in videos.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=850pDTx ... e=youtu.be
I can make this a longer series. Feel free to ask questions for me to answer in videos.
My DeviantArt My Youtube Channel
Anime is awesome! Watch my Anime Sword Techniques series in my Youtube channel! Currently I have covered Gatotsu, Yontoryu, Santoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin and more is coming!
My Art Thread
Anime is awesome! Watch my Anime Sword Techniques series in my Youtube channel! Currently I have covered Gatotsu, Yontoryu, Santoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin and more is coming!
My Art Thread
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Re: Dataman's Artie Threadie
So I have done a manga-ish story. 158 pages.
Name: Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants
Genre: Magical Girl
Synopsis: This is the story of a fantasy world where people live peacefully on a small village surrounded by golden cropfields. Occassionally a clumsy elephant comes and is about to stumble upon the cropfields and eat the crops! However, the armoured witches are there to use their most friendly and unhurtful spells to nonviolently drive them away. The positive people that live there don't want to slaughter innocent animals because the armour witches are so reliable.
Official Art:
The main trio: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Thr ... -510171490
Ao Satopan: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Ao- ... -510377063
Midori Suama: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Mid ... -510523719
Yakan Manju: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Yak ... -510549913
Fan Art: Yakan Manju by Arkan in AnimefansWorldWide: http://s20.postimg.org/uo1a6tprx/071f4d ... 509bfb.png
Read on DeviantArt: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Arm ... -510752416
Or should I put it as a whole on this thread? I'm not very sure there's enough space in here.
Name: Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants
Genre: Magical Girl
Synopsis: This is the story of a fantasy world where people live peacefully on a small village surrounded by golden cropfields. Occassionally a clumsy elephant comes and is about to stumble upon the cropfields and eat the crops! However, the armoured witches are there to use their most friendly and unhurtful spells to nonviolently drive them away. The positive people that live there don't want to slaughter innocent animals because the armour witches are so reliable.
Official Art:
The main trio: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Thr ... -510171490
Ao Satopan: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Ao- ... -510377063
Midori Suama: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Mid ... -510523719
Yakan Manju: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Yak ... -510549913
Fan Art: Yakan Manju by Arkan in AnimefansWorldWide: http://s20.postimg.org/uo1a6tprx/071f4d ... 509bfb.png
Read on DeviantArt: http://8dataman8.deviantart.com/art/Arm ... -510752416
Or should I put it as a whole on this thread? I'm not very sure there's enough space in here.
My DeviantArt My Youtube Channel
Anime is awesome! Watch my Anime Sword Techniques series in my Youtube channel! Currently I have covered Gatotsu, Yontoryu, Santoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin and more is coming!
My Art Thread
Anime is awesome! Watch my Anime Sword Techniques series in my Youtube channel! Currently I have covered Gatotsu, Yontoryu, Santoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin and more is coming!
My Art Thread