Some Days
This song is my most recent one I'm working on. I literally came up with this one a couple of days ago. I started writing this at a time when I was severely depressed because my Ex wouldn't talk to me anymore. (We were still great friends after we broke up, but for some reason we just stopped talking to each other.) It mainly talks about my longing to be with her and go back to the way things used to be.
Lyrics:
V.1
Some Days I wish I could get you back
Some Days I couldn't care at all.
But I find that most of the time,
I couldn't do without.
Chorus 1
I try to hear what my heart has to say,
but my neck aches from trying to listen.
I wish I could see it through,
But y mind keeps on thinking of you.
Lines in the works:
(You are welcome to help me out with these lines. If you gotta suggestion, let me hear it!
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I did not realize what I'd lost until you told me so. (I'm thinking about using this part as part of a bridge in the interlude of the song once there is one.)
Some Days I wish we could just forget
The things that happened the day before
(This is supposed to be the second verse. I just need one more sentence for this one.)
Demo:
Some Days
I have a couple more, but I'll post them later. Right now though I'd love some help with guitars on this song. It's a simple love ballad in a C major chord. So if you could help that'd be amazing.