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Re: Fan/Crackfic: The Last Days of AAO -- (Double Update)

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enigma wrote:*grumble grumble* I'll play my part... *Grumble* Sleuth gets all the attention... I deserve an audiobook... Not fair...*grumble grumble*
Trust me, I'd be willing to help do an audiobook of yours... except nobody should hear my voice. Ever. Like... every time I speak, puppies just burst into tears.
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GD would obviously have visual novel blips. Honestly, what are you people thinking?

Also. I totally predicted the end of the Tap arc. I was afraid at first when I didn't appear for so long, but at the end I knew that Sleuth does ship it after all.
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http://abonika.com?id=16272

I decided to voice one of the scenes in this
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My left earphone loved it.
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DeeYo wrote:My left earphone loved it.


(and shame on whoever-it-was that doubted if LP had a Sexy Dan Green Voice)
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Re: Fan/Crackfic: The Last Days of AAO -- (Double Update)

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Chapter 9 has been written, and is pending editing. I'll release it once the epilogue has been finished, to wrap up the story. With any luck, it should be done by next week.

Thank you all again for reading my nonsense.
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Hey, we all love a bit of nonsense. xP
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The Final Chapter has arrived. All heroes must someday fall.

Thank you again for all the support. I hope you all enjoy! And apologies to Queen.
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Spoiler : :
Bohemian Rhapsody makes everything better. Always. Also, inb4iendupscrewed.
Great job as usual, Sleuth.
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This chapter was really good. Especially LP in general.
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Alrighty.
Spoiler : :
You know, I could do a whole bunch more complimenting, but this chapter is pretty much the culmination of everything I've said before. You do a fantastic job at basically everything you need to do a fantastic job in: tone setting, characterization (Well aside from Meph but eh it's Meph), descriptive writing, transitions... you basically nail all of that quite, quite well. You didn't really succeed at generating tension, in my opinion, but it was an enjoyable enough ride (and I'm not sure how much that was your goal), that that really didn't bother me too much. The ending was fantastic, and pretty much the whole chapter is a fulfilling conclusion to everything that came before.
(Also, you better do what you agreed to do in the epilogue. D:<)
"With good friends by your side, anything is possible. If you really care for each other, it makes everyone stronger! Then you'll have the will to succeed! The world is filled with painful things, it's sad sometimes, and you won't be able to handle it by yourself. But just know: If there's someone that you love, you'll stay on the right path. And you won't ever give in! As long as you keep that person in your heart, you'll keep getting back up. Understand? That's why a Hero never loses!"
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NO YOU CAN'T DOOM ME TO SUCH A TERRIBLE FATE.
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Spoiler : :
Does this mean I can attach things to PMs without exceeding bandwidth now?
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Adaptability

- Helping Hand
- Growl
- Tackle
- Tail Whip
- Sand-Attack
- Baby-Doll Eyes

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Mr. Darcy - Lv.8
Pick Up

- Odor Sleuth
- Tackle
- Growl
- Defense Curl
- Flail

Allistair - Lv.9
- Tackle
- Dragon Rage
- Focus Energy
- Bite
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Re: Fan/Crackfic: The Last Days of AAO -- (The Final Chapter

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Just finished this off now, I've been busy.
That was pure beauty, Sleuth. The ending... magic. Enchanting. Badass seal of approval, would dine again.

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6/10.

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Spoiler : :
I WILL log back in RETURN.
Excellent ending to an excellent story. I approve. :D Well done!
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