Fan/Crackfic: Murder on AAO --STORY FINISHED!--

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Fan/Crackfic: Murder on AAO --STORY FINISHED!--

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Murder! On AAO.
Written By Enigma.

Shock and horror. All of AAO gasped in fear.
In front of them, four corpses. The body's dripping with blood; a large hole punched straight through the forehead.
"Murder." Ferdie sighed and picked up the gun, careful not to leave any fingerprints. Blackrune shook his head in disgust.
"Didn't even bother to make it a locked room."

This is the beginning of the AAO serial murder case.
So, recently Sleuth decided to make up a fan/crackfic of all us AAOer's. Now, when I read it, I said to myself "Wow! Sleuth's creative and funny... I'm going to steal his idea." It was then that I decided to write my own. My own personal little take on our community in the form of a mystery-short story. Here it is. Enjoy.
/!\ ---Disclaimer--- /!\
This is supposed to be a comedy/crackfic. As such, characters have been heavily flanderised. It is not my intention to insult or offend anyone and I am extremely sorry if I have.
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Thank you for reading Murder on AAO. I hope you enjoyed it. If you want to read another fic kind of like it, please go to this link: Shadowsleuth presents: The Last Days of AAO.
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This is pure gold. Looks like Sleuth's fic earned a new and worthy rival.
Spoiler : :
Also Rtaos's characterization is <3
And everything about me, condensed in 2 sentences. 'twas a good cameo.
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Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Spoiler : :
Chapter 1 is pretty much 100% cameos and character setting. In chapter 2 you will get real plot and more time with the established characters as well as introducing some other characters. No spoilers but there will be Kwando, DLA, Lord Wolfenstein and more.
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:awesome:
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0/10

not enough DWaM
ACE HOBO needs to be cooler
you need to throw Maria in there for Rune
Tap should be the victim to ease his suffering (though the shame will never end, I'm afraid)
enigma needs a trait aside from mimicking Rune (he should mimick me, duh)
Rtaos needs to look like he never slept
throw in NN as a deus ex machina that solves the entire thing out of the blue because his flight was delayed
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DWaM wrote:0/10

not enough DWaM
There will be much more DWaM in Chap. 2.
ACE HOBO needs to be cooler
Ahahaha. I wrote him as Deadpool, so... He's more of BP's jerk/insane side than any cool side that POSSIBLY exists.
you need to throw Maria in there for Rune
But maria's not reeeeaal. His maid thing's still there though.
Tap should be the victim to ease his suffering (though the shame will never end, I'm afraid)
Who said he won't be?
enigma needs a trait aside from mimicking Rune (he should mimick me, duh)
Enigma will mimick everyone and get assaulted by everyone, provided he lives long enough.
Rtaos needs to look like he never slept
He does. You just need to IMAGINE it.
throw in NN as a deus ex machina that solves the entire thing out of the blue because his flight was delayed
This may not follow Knox or Dine but it's still a fair Whodunnit. NN IS at the party though...
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enigma wrote:Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Spoiler : :
Chapter 1 is pretty much 100% cameos and character setting. In chapter 2 you will get real plot and more time with the established characters as well as introducing some other characters. No spoilers but there will be Kwando, DLA, Lord Wolfenstein and more.
Spoiler : :
Was wondering why Kwando wasn't here for the party.
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Technically and canonically, every AAO member's at the party. Whether they appear or not is a different story.
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Gee, I'm not good enough to be a detective, eh? D:
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Nope. You're DWaM's Watson.
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Does that mean I'm going to be a victim D:
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Maybe. But, don't worry, you'll have a speaking role either way. :cute:
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Will there be typos?
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Funnily enough, my plan was "too hav yu tak leik ths."
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