Eternal Odyssey: A Warped Fate - Endless Time Prequel (ALL!)

[ShadowEdgeworth]

Chapter 3 is now up, showcasing the effect of Mika's sister's condition...

Also, this book is very close to becoming actually physical, due to the Createspace offer. HOHO. ^^

[energizerspark]

So you're telling me I could walk into WHSmith in a few months and see "Eternal Odyssey - Now Only £7.99!"?

[ShadowEdgeworth]

So you're telling me I could walk into WHSmith in a few months and see "Eternal Odyssey - Now Only £7.99!"?

Not necessarily in a few months, but in a few years maybe - this is just to have 5 copies of the book for my own use.

[energizerspark]

Oh. If so, then you have to show us pictures.

[ShadowEdgeworth]

Chapter 4 is now up! Sorry for the delay! ^^'

[Remilia Scarlet]

Ha, cleverly written. For a second there I thought you were rushing into a big confrontation with the enemies too early.

[LunchPolice]

Waaaah! I want moooore! MOOOOORE!!

[ShadowEdgeworth]

Sorry for the delay folks, I've been quite, quite busy. However, Chapter 5 is now up for your curious eyes!

[energizerspark]

So have your personal proof copies arrived yet?

[LunchPolice]

ARGH CLIFFHANGER

[ShadowEdgeworth]

In preparation for the next tale in the Eternal Odyssey trilogy, The Endless Time... I've uploaded ALL Chapters of A Warped Fate. All for you to read. ^^

Sorry for the delay! ^^'

[LunchPolice]

Oh dude, I've been wondering about this story lately!
GAAAH I NEED TO MAKE TIME FOR THIS

[Remilia Scarlet]

Oh, am I the first to have gotten round to reading the rest of this? Well at any rate, I'm glad I finally did. I liked the kind of constant rise and fall that was going on throughout - how every time Mika would set out to do something, it'd end up in disaster somehow. Obviously it soon becomes apparent that this is how things will go each time and ends up as a question of how exactly everything will go wrong. I do think the members of Mika's crew could have used some more development, I was hoping they would as the story was leading up to their deaths. But the development for the main characters was handled well and now I feel like I know Mika, Kathryn and Merrik more. It should enrich the experience once their roleplays pick up again, whenever that is ^^' I also really like the last few sentences of the final two chapters - regarding the moral Mika gave and the lead-in to Endless Time. It was a good moral to take from such a tragic story. And of course, hype for the hibernating roleplay.

So yes, fine story sir. I look forward to the next in the series.

[LunchPolice]

Oh man I keep forgetting this exists! I better get on this thing.

[ShadowEdgeworth]

Oh, am I the first to have gotten round to reading the rest of this? Well at any rate, I'm glad I finally did. I liked the kind of constant rise and fall that was going on throughout - how every time Mika would set out to do something, it'd end up in disaster somehow. Obviously it soon becomes apparent that this is how things will go each time and ends up as a question of how exactly everything will go wrong. I do think the members of Mika's crew could have used some more development, I was hoping they would as the story was leading up to their deaths. But the development for the main characters was handled well and now I feel like I know Mika, Kathryn and Merrik more. It should enrich the experience once their roleplays pick up again, whenever that is ^^' I also really like the last few sentences of the final two chapters - regarding the moral Mika gave and the lead-in to Endless Time. It was a good moral to take from such a tragic story. And of course, hype for the hibernating roleplay.

So yes, fine story sir. I look forward to the next in the series.

Ah, why thank you good sir! Extremely glad you enjoyed it, and that I seem to have achieved what I had set out to do. In retrospect, I agree about the other crew members getting more development, but I guess this was something I just lost sight of while I was concentrating on the main characters. Hopefully ET will pick up again, so I can properly start reflecting this backstory in Mika's character. But yes... thanks alot! Praise from you, is praise indeed!