Showcase your artistic creations, whether that be sprites, music, drawings or literature, and whether they be related to the Ace Attorney universe or not.
I have the old sprites saved, so here's a composite of all of the new ones since I did this totally incorrectly when I first began the thread. I'm going to post Edgeworth and Franziska in the free use topic and see if anyone wants them, but here they are for your use! I just ask that you please don't use Elizabeth yet, as I still need to work on her hair and some jumpy sprites.
Spoiler : :
Young Edgeworth (I'm willing to do the body for free use if asked, I just don't need it):
Young Franziska (same with her other sprites):
Elizabeth:
Last edited by alphemo on Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:03 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Hmm.., is he wearing a cravat? Do you intend him to be Von-karma household age? Because if he is, he definitely looks too young. He looks below 8 years old, maybe you can make the eyes smaller if that's the case. Also his eyebrow looks a bit too thick, his hair too.
And..I don't know, his body looks super small to me. Maybe you can make some part of the shoulders visible? Or you can make the head a bit smaller.
I'm not a professional though, this is just my thoughts. And although something do looks a bit off, but he's a cutie and the sprite is great XD.
I think the body comment is it. I'll definitely repair that. He's supposed to be twelve, so I'll fiddle with the eyes and see what happens. I haven't played the very first AA game, but he's supposed to have just arrived at von Karma's (so we'll say it's AU if that doesn't work--I don't want to mess up time). Thanks for the compliment, though!
And not to be rude, but of course there's a difference. lol
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Updated body dimensions (still fixing coat--current one is a placeholder)
Last edited by Tap on Fri Jun 01, 2012 1:02 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason:Merged doublepost
Really, all I need for the normal sprite is the head and shoulders--which is part of why I've done nothing on the body apart from the bow and right arm. Everything is still being reworked, including the hair, bow (DEAR LORD THE BOW) and face, and I also need to change her skin color to the original Franziska's coloration, but this is what I have so far. I hate the chunkiness of the hair by her face--that'll likely be the first thing fixed after I post--her left eyelid is too strong, the smile (which shouldn't take long, honestly) is too short, et cetera... I have a lot to do, and it's discouraging. I figure that this might garner me some help on where to go from here, however, so here it is.
Per the rules of the 'Your Art' forum, I've merged "Alphemo's Sprites: Progress on young!Franziska (Spoilers JFA)" into the first sprite thread you created: "You must showcase your art* in a single topic entitled with your username."
Progress on an OC. Currently named Elizabeth. Still a lot of work to do on everything, but here's how she's coming along!
I wish I had stuff from when I sprited as a 13-year-old. I had quite a portfolio, but I deleted all of it. Anyway, any critique, even though things aren't anywhere near done, is very appreciated!
Actually, I came here to showcase some of that on my young Edgeworth, funnily enough. He looks MUCH better now. I've accepted that I'm pretty mediocre at spriting.
She's up next. I'll have to think about who to frankensprite her with, though...
I'm going to post Edgeworth and Franziska in the free use topic and see if anyone wants them, but here they are for your use! I just ask that you please don't use Elizabeth yet, as I still need to work on her hair and some jumpy sprites. 
