Yey, my first trial thread. After five years of being registered member (though just a year of being active member), how the time flies. And to think that the main idea behind Angela Light series is exactly from those old times of talking animation that never ever stopped! Actually, it was some time after that, back then I had an idea of a trial where Jake Marshall was a movie director. I did reuse that for my first not ever send competition entry. Back then I was calling her Themis White, she had different design, different color palette and different intended personality. But still, the main idea behind her story was this same. I’ll talk about that after full release of the first episode.
Main Cast
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Angela Light
Age: 21
Gender: Female
A rookie attorney who begins her career working for Gavin Law Office after her studies in Europe. Seemingly lacking any sense of modesty or respect to the court, but also truly protective over her own family.
Evan Light
Age: 16
Gender: Male
A high school student and big otaku who is Angela’s younger brother. He is a calm and nice boy who sometimes acts very childish regarding his hobbies.
Kristoph Gavin
Age: 26
Gender: Male
The head of Gavin Law Office, known as “The Coolest defense on the West”. A renowned and respected lawyer who took the place of top defense attorney after Phoenix Wright’s fall from grace. For Angela, he is a truly supportive mentor who helped her a lot with becoming a lawyer.
Klavier Gavin
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Kristoph’s younger brother, a rising rock star and the prosecutor who just a year ago took a big part in disbarring of legendary attorney Phoenix Wright. Still dealing with the aftermath of his own debut case Klavier has a hard time determining who he can trust…
Case Descriptions Turnabout Siblings
Spoiler : Description :
Angela Light debuts as a defense attorney with her own younger brother as her client. Dedicated to winning the case at any cost, Angela encounters a dark sign of her past that makes her take rash decisions...
Bobby’s 3rd testimony
Present Autopsy Report on statement 8
Present John Carter
Select “I Don’t”.
Present Lamp
Point location in front of the victim
Bobby’s 4th testimony
Present ID Card or Security Log on statement 6
Bobby’s final testimony
Press statement 3 -> Press Further -> Statement 3-1 added
If you press statement 3-1 don’t ever press it further
Present John Carter on statement 3-1 OR present Evan Light instead and then present John Carter -> Statement 3-1 amended
Press statement 5 -> Press Further -> Statement 5-1 added
If you see a warning when presenting Coke Can on statement 3-1 before adding statement 5-1 rethink it
Present Coke Can on amended statement 3-1
Point location of the vending machine
Present Evan Light
Present Wendy Oldbag
Present Mrs. Dark’s Affidavit
Present ID Card or Security Log
Confessed Turnabout
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After the events of previous case Angela takes another one. But with prosecutor making himself look like a hero there is only one certainty - the defendant will be found Guilty.
Angela takes yet another case, despite already knowing the sad truth about it. At the same time she meets a certain man who can see secrets locked in her heart. What his judgment over her will be?
Status: In planning stage.
Turnabout at Dawn
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Angela faces a court where all is wrong. The accusation of her client, questionable trial processing and choice of prosecutor... And that’s just the beginning of things she has to overcome.
Status: In planning stage.
Illumination of Turnabout
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The time has come. Past sins, real crimes, family truths and dark secrets... Everything comes to the light.
Status: In planning stage.
Help needed Voice for Angela
I need a voice for Angela, . I'm currently using Mia, but she is just a placeholder.
Angela is pretty confident and bit haughty, she often treats little victories as a permission to ridicule her opponents.
Last edited by Gamer2002 on Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:02 pm, edited 15 times in total.
Spyromed (who I don't know why deleted his posts ;P) gave up on proofreading due to lack of time and real life stuff. So I'm in desperate need of another proofreader.
I don't ask for a lot, just a grammar clean up that would ensure my text to be properly understandable and readable, and also acceptably in character in case of canon characters. I don't want the trial to be rewritten into perfect english, I just want it to be good enough. I am also understandable when it comes to speed of proofreading (I still have to animate Angela and finish final intro pic ;P).
First part has ~1700 frames (Spyromed checked first 600). Second part is also ready and has ~2100 frames, though I didn't check it with grammar checking programs like part 1.
I won't be able to do a ton of work immediately due to being busy with IRL stuff (and comp entry help), but I can definitely chip in on this.
"A slow sort of country!" said the Queen. "Now, here, you see, it takes all the running you can do, to keep in the same place. If you want to get somewhere else, you must run at least twice as fast as that!"
Well, I can't say i made some trials, so i might be lacking in technicalties, however i've played lot and lot of trials, so... If you're willing i'd be delighted to test it and give you feedback.
Oh btw, it would be a pleasure to proofread you... Assuming there is stll some vacancy.
I'm proofreading the second part, and it's slow going due to a number of personal obligations on my end. If anyone wants to help out, I'd recommend checking in with Gamer2002. He's taking the time to delay release until everything is proofread, so I'm feeling a bit of a ticking clock now that part 1 is coming out!
"A slow sort of country!" said the Queen. "Now, here, you see, it takes all the running you can do, to keep in the same place. If you want to get somewhere else, you must run at least twice as fast as that!"
Actually, the release was delayed also because I still had to make miniatures and I had some problems with resizing Evan's sprites (original filenames were too long and my photoshop cut them, what caused talking and not talking gifs to overwrite each others without me noticing man, I was swearing like mad because of it).
Though releasing part 1 to put additional pressure on proofreaders was something I considered ;]
BTW, Ferdie, if you have time send me your review of the case, even if short. You and Doc are the only one who know it in its entirety, but you guys aren't telling me anything :p