SuperAj3's Sprites!

[Ace Pointer]

Hmm... What the?!
Ema Skye in Gyakuten Saiban 5? Wow. Just... Wow. It took you a long time to do all that, I guess.

[SuperAj3]

It took me a while, yeah, but I'm proud of it!

Also,
My Diamond in the Rough Entry:

Name: Marino L'Aqua

[SuperAj3]

A little update on the Athena set I'm working on.
ShiroForever from CR offered to help with making extra poses, and so we're both working on making them now! Also, Hessehl's been helping us touch up the sprites, bringing the people who are working on this (Including Rajin for making the 1st DA sprite of her) to 4 people!

Here' the album's link of what we have so far:
http://imgur.com/a/tyUEF

[TheDoctor]

The zoomed in sprite is good, but something looks off about the inside of her mouth.

[kwando1313]

Yeah, to me... It looks off as well. I can't place my finger on what it is, just... The weird S thing looks weird.

[SuperAj3]

The Zoomed in sprite is ripped from the iOS one. I took screenshots and downscaled them. I could always touch it up. That S Is her top teeth and bottom, but because there's no cell shading it doesn't look separate. I'll try to fix that up. Thanks for both pointing that out

EDIT: How's this?

[Calvinball]

Aside from the "S" thing (which you've fixed) it all looks really nice! I don't know much about art personally, so I don't have much to say aside from that it all looks very smooth and consistent as far as I can tell.

[kwando1313]

That looks a lot better now.

[TheDoctor]

It's better, but it still looks a little off. I think it's because the shading looks different from the rest of the sprite. The face looks like an actual sprite, but the mouth looks like it came from a 3D model, if that makes any sense.

[SuperAj3]

Thanks!

It's better, but it still looks a little off. I think it's because the shading looks different from the rest of the sprite. The face looks like an actual sprite, but the mouth looks like it came from a 3D model, if that makes any sense.

I kinda get what you're saying. This is the screenshot I downscaled from the iOS version:
http://i.imgur.com/YWQ0wIW.jpg (Large image)

Maybe if there's anything here that I edited/failed to edit that looks off you can compare it?

[TheDoctor]

I think it's mainly the areas that are mostly white, like the teeth, the necklace, and the whites of her eyes. There's some subtle shading there that make it look different than the DS sprites.

Also, the tongue could probably be cut down to one or two colors, but right now, it seems to have the same shading issue as the other areas I mentioned.

[Enthalpy]

Nice work overall.

The first thing that jumps out at me is the outline of the far side of Athena's jaw. There are a couple of pixels that just... bounce up and down for some reason.

[SuperAj3]

Thanks for the feedback guys. I'll get to touching it up when I get the time

[SuperAj3]

I got sidetracked working on Athena and ended up doing an entry for CR's Spriter's comp.

This is my "Assistant's time!" Entry:Album
Name: Dez Reyner
He's special assistant ability is he's able to see the original form of an object or scene thanks to his heterochromatic (different coloured) right eye.

[SuperAj3]

Woah, 3 posts in a row... Still, updates are updates!

I got hit by the Layton Bros nostalgia after watching a bunch of Lupin III and wanted to make a sprite of Lucy, my favourite character by far.

here's a really WIP WIP:

Spoiler : Big Image :

I probably won't finish any more sprites for a while, it's exam period and my procrastination needs to end!

EDIT: I lied, here's Lucy!

~ "Oi Prof! Let's crack those stinkers!"

EDIT 2: Although Hessehl made an Awesome revamp of my Kendall sprite, I just kept getting bugged at how terrible my first one was.
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