Intro: http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=136481
Trial Former: [Incomplete]
Trial Latter: [Incomplete]
Story: You are a new, fresh out of law school, defense attorney. You have just started your own law office, but now what? News start to spread of some kid getting ready to be executed in 4 days. You soon go to the detention center in order to get a retrial on his case. However, the defendant is less than pleased to see you. Discover the truth of this incident and try to succeed a "Not Guilty" verdict instead of "Guilty" like the previous trial before it. Find out who the prosecutor is and overcome their tactics! The defendant is a ticking time bomb on that day, and you have to. save him before it's too late! This is, The Young Turnabout!
(Note: This is my first published trial, so any suggestions to make the sections a little bit better are welcome.)
[T] The Young Turnabout
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Re: [T] The Young Turnabout
I'm playing it now, here are my thoughts:
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Re: [T] The Young Turnabout
I've listened to your suggestions and made some changes to the introduction.
-- Fixes
Ages: I made some adjustments to the ages of each main character. Like Henry (young) going from 5 to 8, with Henry going from 12 to 17. Minor adjustments were made to Charlie, William, Atmey, and Klavier. Also, the year ranges were also changed to reflect this.
New Talk for Henry: What would possibly happen if you try to prove Henry wrong without presenting evidence?
Errors: Some errors were fixed, like music not playing in the evidence room. Timers were also added, now can move without a click.
Little bit more user friendly: Two more frames that kinda push the average player in the right direction when first speaking with Henry.
-- End
Info on Trial Former: I have already started to work on it, and about to start the trial. Gonna take a break for Christmas and it might have a release date of January.
(Any more suggestions will be appreciated)
-- Fixes
Ages: I made some adjustments to the ages of each main character. Like Henry (young) going from 5 to 8, with Henry going from 12 to 17. Minor adjustments were made to Charlie, William, Atmey, and Klavier. Also, the year ranges were also changed to reflect this.
New Talk for Henry: What would possibly happen if you try to prove Henry wrong without presenting evidence?
Errors: Some errors were fixed, like music not playing in the evidence room. Timers were also added, now can move without a click.
Little bit more user friendly: Two more frames that kinda push the average player in the right direction when first speaking with Henry.
-- End
Info on Trial Former: I have already started to work on it, and about to start the trial. Gonna take a break for Christmas and it might have a release date of January.
(Any more suggestions will be appreciated)