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★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
Phew. I've finally finished the review for chapter 4. In chapter 5, are the investigation and the trial in the same chapter? If so, make sure you split them in future.
Also, the investigations and trials don't happen on separate days. Trials are usually done in the morning, and investigations are usually done in the evening. You might want to edit your case to reflect that.
Also, the investigations and trials don't happen on separate days. Trials are usually done in the morning, and investigations are usually done in the evening. You might want to edit your case to reflect that.
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
Will do! And yes they are in the same chapter.Meph wrote:Phew. I've finally finished the review for chapter 4. In chapter 5, are the investigation and the trial in the same chapter? If so, make sure you split them in future.
Also, the investigations and trials don't happen on separate days. Trials are usually done in the morning, and investigations are usually done in the evening. You might want to edit your case to reflect that.
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
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Chapter 5
Chapter 5
- Did you use Calisto Yew's theme for Ms Thorne in earlier chapters? Edit them so that you do.
- See if you can add some sound effects in some places when characters are talking.
- Spaces after ellipsis.
- Mort seems to disappear after talking to him about Eve.
- I don't get the pun about Eve being angelic.
- Change it so that I have to use the Move button to move to the school's entrance.
- Before Trayton gives them the newspaper, use the "Display evidence" action so that we know what he's talking about.
- The newspaper has a very long description. Put it in a "Check" page instead.
- It's very unusual for Apollo to accuse someone as the killer in front of their face in an investigation. They usually do that in court. Usually, Apollo confronts them without giving away that he knows that they're the killer.
- There needs to be a discussion in the defendant's lobby. You could just do a re-cap of everything that you discovered in the investigation.
- Don't forget to use the location dialogue when you enter court.
- Show Trayton on the stand for two seconds immediately after the black screen.
- Only the prosecution should ask for the name and occupation.
- Correction / Go on, tell us why you couldn't be the spy. / Please tell us why you couldn't be the spy.
- When Apollo accuses Trayton in court, it doesn't have enough impact. I've edited it for you.
- Use the "Shout" sound effect for Fallborough instead of Edgeworth's objection voice. Also, make sure you put him on the witness stand, not the co-council.
- Use the Final Testimony music in the witness testimony as well as in the cross-examination.
- Let's make the final testimony a bit harder. Change the testimony so that it's like this:
- Yeah, so maybe I'm a cop.
- But why would a member of law enforcement take such a drastic turn?
- You still have no means of tying me to the crime.
- You're better off just giving up. It's over, Red.
- Let's add some more sound effects to reflect the emotion in dialogues.
- Use Display evidence when Apollo says "Observe, if you will, the murder weapon."
- The Pursuit theme stops too early.
- I don't think you should make the judge declare his verdict yet. Make Trayton object before that happens.
- Correction / Present your final evidence against this witness! / Present your final evidence that proves this witness to be the culprit.
- It seems strange to use Confess the Truth immediately after you stopped using it earlier. Change either the former or the latter to use a different theme.
- Once again, please use the action "Display evidence" for the computer screen.
- When the judge says "I would like to officially suspend this trial." That is incorrect. Trayton is not the defendant of this trial. He would be tried in a separate trial. So the judge wouldn't be suspending this trial; he would be ending it.
- Correction / I hereby pronounce the defendant, Todd Hayes... / I hereby declare the defendant, Todd Hayes...
- When the player is meant to present evidence in the Defendant Lobby, they shouldn't get a second chance. If they present the wrong evidence, that's just tough.
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
Because she's dead and would be in heaven and/or be an angel.Meph wrote:
- I don't get the pun about Eve being angelic.
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Oh, I see.
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UPDATE: Sorry progress on Case Three has been so slow. I've been working on my entry for the Turnabout Twist contest. I promise it will get done, though!
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I am disapoint at myself.
How could I have missed the release of Case Three?! I deserve to be whipped. In some brighter news~
I'll spend the night playing Case Three!
How could I have missed the release of Case Three?! I deserve to be whipped. In some brighter news~
I'll spend the night playing Case Three!
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Let me know what you think of it when you've finished.Strife wrote:I am disapoint at myself.
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
Gah! There's something wrong with the saving feature in the Trial Player. Does this save work for anyone else?
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
It decodes to valid data:
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I'm aware of that, yes. But does the save actually work when you open that link, or is it ignored?
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
(Will comment on Day Two when I finish playing it.)TheFifthAce wrote:Let me know what you think of it when you've finished.Strife wrote:I am disapoint at myself.
How could I have missed the release of Case Three?! I deserve to be whipped. In some brighter news~
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
The saving issues have been fixed, so I've finally been able to finish the review. It was brilliant!
As I said, fix all of the points that I've mentioned and give me a PM.
As I said, fix all of the points that I've mentioned and give me a PM.
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Re: ★ Trial Series: Ace Attorney Chronicles: Apollo Justice
Great, thank you!! I'll get right on those changes.
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