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Re: Broken Commandments

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I'm about...halfway done with my case. I'll try and cram as much as I can in this last stretch but I don't expect it to be finished before the deadline.
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Having tested DWaM's—I'm down for testing others' too so long as me double-dipping is all within the remit of comp rules! I'm hesitant to approach anybody myself as a new on-site user in case they'd rather take someone with more of a rep, but I'm totally happy if anybody interested wants to PM first. (Will edit if/when this happens!)
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Double dipping on testing isn’t against any rules, but if you do it, I’d recommend keeping in mind some degree of common sense. (e.g. not spilling the beans about details of one person’s entry to another entrant). Probably goes without saying, but I figured it was worth mentioning.
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We have received Gizmological's entry, but for the rest of you, there's still a little less than a week left.
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I'm going full steam ahead this last stretch. I may or may not get it done by the deadline. We'll just have to see what happens.
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I've finished the last scene before the police arrival and am turning it in now (may be unpolished cause I've been the only one to playtest it this month, but whatever, I'm drained lol). I will say that there are changes I seek to make to these early parts if/when I go back to this case - which I probably will - mostly because some of the more comedic sections can go on a bit long, and I should make some dialogue sections into actual investigation blocks (I think two of them).
That said, I'm proud of what I have, and I think this is my strongest character writing so far - plus, I've taken a non-traditional angle with characterization and delivery, which I personally haven't seen many people do in their cases, so I hope to impress.
I excitedly await the review/judging period! Good luck, everybody!
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Can confirm that we've received risefromtheashes' entry
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We've also received DWaM's entry
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Two days left! Get those bones shaking!
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- Athena Cykes ~ Locks on the Heart (synopsis)
- May Your Memory Be a Blessing
- A Little Piece of Healing
- The Killer Turnabout (~70% complete!)
- I guess we made the Looking Back case comp ceremony with Super legenda, but that's not an actual case

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Check out our music & art thread here!
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I'm excited to play these as they release! Was fun getting to participate (in a small way) doing some art for a few entries!
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Interested to see on how the entries turn out to be, especially the veterans'. Good luck to all the participants!
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We've received Trybien and Spongesonic's entry.

The deadline is quickly approaching. Make sure to get any last-minute touches done and get those cases submitted!
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DJJ6800's entry has been received, making the current total of entries 5.
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The Mindcastle System
(Don't know what a system is? Play 6-4, and take a look here.)
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OUR CASES:
- Athena Cykes ~ Locks on the Heart (synopsis)
- May Your Memory Be a Blessing
- A Little Piece of Healing
- The Killer Turnabout (~70% complete!)
- I guess we made the Looking Back case comp ceremony with Super legenda, but that's not an actual case

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Check out our music & art thread here!
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Re: Broken Commandments

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It's pleasantly surprising to see that the last few comps have consistently been getting at least around five entries.
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