Shelter In Place
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- DJJ6800
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Re: Shelter In Place
Maybe once I get the motivation/time to finish it.
My trials:Tales of a Turnabout http://aaonline.fr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=12553
Turnabout Reality http://aaonline.fr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=12949
Turnabout in the Spotlight viewtopic.php?p=782753#p782753
Turnabout Reality http://aaonline.fr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=12949
Turnabout in the Spotlight viewtopic.php?p=782753#p782753
- clcman
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Re: Shelter In Place
Second review! No particular spoilers. Next up is The Experimental Turnabout by Awsome2464.
Spoiler : That's the Way the Turnabout Crumbles by AbsurdAttorney :
A Less BASEic Turnabout Part 1 is now in beta. Stand by for further orders.
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
- AbsurdAttorney
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Re: Shelter In Place
Thanks so much for the review. You hit the nail right on its head. Can't wait for the comp to end so I can go back and finish that case. There's a ton that I want to edit and change.
Regardless, I look forward to reading your reviews of the other entries!
Regardless, I look forward to reading your reviews of the other entries!
- clcman
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Re: Shelter In Place
Third review! Not much to spoil. Next up is A Worldly Turnabout by Tiagofvarela.
Spoiler : The Experimental Turnabout by Awesome2464 :
A Less BASEic Turnabout Part 1 is now in beta. Stand by for further orders.
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
- Awsome2464
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Re: Shelter In Place
Yeah, due to my late start and not as much free time as I had hoped, I didn't really get far enough along to properly take advantage of the theme relevance, as well as the main plot concept, as it is better showcased later down the line. Still, I suppose the best I can do is take your advice to heart and finish the case when possible
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Re: Shelter In Place
Awsome2464, kudos for your entry!
- clcman
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Re: Shelter In Place
That's the spirit! All criticism I give is for the purposes of making a better story. Go for it! (And believe me, I've handed in a LOT of unfinished comp entries. I understand your situation.)Awesome2464 wrote:Still, I suppose the best I can do is take your advice to heart and finish the case when possible
Fourth review.
Spoiler : A Worldly Turnabout by Tiagofvarela :
Utterly useless trivia: This is the first of these reviews where the picture and the quote did not have the same speaker. It's been a complete coincidence every time, I promise.
A Less BASEic Turnabout Part 1 is now in beta. Stand by for further orders.
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
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Re: Shelter In Place
Oh my, I'm both so excited and nervous!
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Re: Shelter In Place
Alright. Those are some of the things I wanted to figure out. Profiles should be revealed as you meet the people in question.
Still wondering if I'll reveal the notes before or after meeting everyone, but I will make it clear that reading it all at once is by no means necessary.
As you might've guessed, I revealed everything right at the start because otherwise the entry would really have nothing at all.
(Also, is this the first time a review of one of my entries has not commented on the name? ;P)
Still wondering if I'll reveal the notes before or after meeting everyone, but I will make it clear that reading it all at once is by no means necessary.
As you might've guessed, I revealed everything right at the start because otherwise the entry would really have nothing at all.
(Also, is this the first time a review of one of my entries has not commented on the name? ;P)
A Laggy Turnabout ★
A Batty Turnabout ★
A Tricky Turnabout ★
Upcoming: A Worldly Turnabout, A Courtly Turnabout, A Clumsy Turnabout, A Needy Turnabout
A Batty Turnabout ★
A Tricky Turnabout ★
Upcoming: A Worldly Turnabout, A Courtly Turnabout, A Clumsy Turnabout, A Needy Turnabout
- clcman
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Re: Shelter In Place
Final review! Of the Final Day, no less! Well, my reviews are done. AwesomeYears is still playing through cases and isn't sure if he will post reviews or not. And then someone will win something, probably.
Spoiler : Turnabout of the Final Day by Super legenda :
A Less BASEic Turnabout Part 1 is now in beta. Stand by for further orders.
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
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Re: Shelter In Place
Well then, I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Yeah... I'll definitely need a tester before publishing it, thanks for pointing out that spelling mistake.
I was getting really nervous about this review, as this is the first Horror story that I've made, so I was unsure about if it worked or not.
Well then, now waiting for the Awards ceremony as a christmas gift, may every entrant do well too! Good luck!
I was getting really nervous about this review, as this is the first Horror story that I've made, so I was unsure about if it worked or not.
Well then, now waiting for the Awards ceremony as a christmas gift, may every entrant do well too! Good luck!
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Re: Shelter In Place
I find it pretty funny how at least three of the entries used the same custom character sprite in their story
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Re: Shelter In Place
He just works really well often, but is true, lol.Awsome2464 wrote:I find it pretty funny how at least three of the entries used the same custom character sprite in their story
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Re: Shelter In Place
If you think that's crazy, The Experimental Turnabout and A Worldly Turnabout both featured the same sprites using the same name (Delia Kartmann) for the virtual defendant and the head of state of not!Las Vegas, respectively.Awsome2464 wrote:I find it pretty funny how at least three of the entries used the same custom character sprite in their story
A Less BASEic Turnabout Part 1 is now in beta. Stand by for further orders.
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
What do REAL, NON-BRIBED people have to say about HTB!?
"This really changed the way I thought about Phoenix as a character. ...Wow." - Reecer6
"HTB! contains truths that might be hard to stomach, but had to be unveiled nonetheless." - Blackrune
"This deserves a best plot twist award." - Evo
"It changed my life, and it can change yours too. For the better, I mean." - Calvinball
"I will never look at Phoenix Wright the same way again" - PhoenixRises123
"omg best thing on aao" - AceAttorneyMaster111
DISCOVER THE TRUTH YOU NEVER KNEW YOU DIDN'T KNOW IN HTB! PROLOGUE AND PART 1, AVAILABLE NOW!!
"Those people who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do." -Isaac Asimov
"For every complex problem, there is an answer that is clear, simple and wrong." -H. L. Mencken
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Re: Shelter In Place
Ok, this is getting absurd.clcman wrote:If you think that's crazy, The Experimental Turnabout and A Worldly Turnabout both featured the same sprites using the same name (Delia Kartmann) for the virtual defendant and the head of state of not!Las Vegas, respectively.Awsome2464 wrote:I find it pretty funny how at least three of the entries used the same custom character sprite in their story
... This is Ace Attorney though, of course things get absurd.