Turnabout Convergence

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Re: Turnabout Convergence

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Congrats Rune~ :D
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Congratulations, Blackrune!

Now post it so we can see the awesomeness.

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You have my congratulations, Rune.
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pls, we all know /I/ am clearly the ingredient of success...

2/2 for case comp helping~
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Congratulations Blackrune!

Looking forward to the release.
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Congrattzy gratz, Rune.
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kwando1313 wrote:pls, we all know /I/ am clearly the ingredient of success...

2/2 for case comp helping~
correlation =/= causation

(...unless you're bad player. 2/2 for cast comp making 8) )
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Congrats on first place Rune! Looking forward to playing your case. :D
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Grats to Rune, not all that surprised since your trials are generally among my favourites on here. NOW SHOWCASE ALREADY YOU BRILLIANT MADMAN.
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Re: Turnabout Convergence

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Bad Player wrote:
kwando1313 wrote:pls, we all know /I/ am clearly the ingredient of success...

2/2 for case comp helping~
correlation =/= causation

(...unless you're bad player. 2/2 for cast comp making 8) )
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Well, congratulations Rune. I guess the kIng did fall, though not in the way I expected. Ah, well. Maybe Rune and DWaM both are too busy to make a new comp and Tap and I get the prize anyway. XD
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Re: Turnabout Convergence

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Please. We all know Rune is going to host the comp.

OR ELSE. >: (
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Re: Turnabout Convergence

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Gotta say I'm pretty shattered at our result... I thought we had done a lot better than that, but I suppose it'll teach us we need to improve on our skills before we can be considered challengers, however... Congratulations, Rune! The King has fallen... About time! :D *caught by Wolfie*
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Re: Turnabout Convergence

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Congrats to Rune, and everyone else involved in the comp!

I kind of like the results that way. Losing to my disciple, after all this taunting , would've hurt (even though from what I've played so far your case is amazing), and while a threepeat might've been better for your ego, DWaM, you've got to admit the "it's got great potential but we need to see the rest" verdict is a powerful motivation for both of us to finish the game strong and not disappoint the expectations.
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