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TICKING TIME BOMB

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TICKING TIME BOMB
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Task:


There's no time to explain! Listen very carefully. Make a case that can be completed in 30 minutes or less, or everyone explodes. Okay, technically everyone reads at different speeds so 30 minutes isn't an exact requirement, but the point is, the case should be short. But not TOO short! It should still feel complete. But there should be a sense of urgency about it. If you want an example, your case should be about as long as or shorter than Ace Attorney 1-1.

If your case does take longer than 30 minutes to beat, you won't be disqualified or anything. But Theme relevance will be judged by how effectively you make use of a limited time frame to tell your story. Everything should have a purpose. Brevity is the soul of wit. You have a fair bit of time to make your case, so you can either spend that time polishing it, or densely packing it with as much content as you can. Up to you. But it should be a case that feels short, but is still compelling. This is the kind of theme where you might want to look over your work and repeatedly trim the fat so that only the best and most relevant content remains. Really try to isolate the core message you're trying to get across, and then pack it tightly into a tiny 30 minute box.

Judging:

You will be judged on the following criteria:

Story: Just because your story is short, doesn't mean you should skimp on telling it. Your case should keep the player interested and shouldn't be hard to follow. Make use of your time effectively. Think of it as if you have 30 minutes to tell the best possible story you can. If your case has characters, you'll also be judged on how well you were able to characterize them within the time alloted.

Presentation: How nice the case looks, sounds, and feels. It may be completable in 30 minutes, but it shouldn't look like it was made in 30 minutes. You've got 2 months. Use them. I feel like I should pre-empt this as well: Making your case automatically scroll its text really fast so that you can't even read it is not a very good form of presentation. I don't recommend that.

Gameplay: How fun the case is to play. Self-explanatory. It's up to you whether you want to go the traditional Ace Attorney route, or something less gameplay-oriented, or something new. If your case doesn't have any gameplay, then having a mystery or some intrigue is one way of still having some engagement and thought from the player even without interactivity.

Theme Relevance: Aside from the case being short, you'll also be judged on how well you manage to instill a sense of urgency. The theme is "Ticking Time Bomb". Whether you want to take that literally and have a literal time limit before something bad happens, or you want to go more subtle with it and just have an overall sense of panic or urgency is entirely up to you. But if you don't hurry, we're all gonna die!

Conditions:

- Entries must have been created between October 17th, 2022 and December 18th 2022.

- Entry and walkthrough (if applicable) must be submitted to TimeAxis and GuardianDreamer by the deadline.

- Entry must not be showcased until it has been judged.

- Entry must not be edited after submission until the competition is over.

- Entry may contain spoilers from the main Ace Attorney series, Prof Layton vs Ace Attorney, and Ace Attorney Investigations 1 and 2. If your case spoils anything else, please give a warning when submitting. Also, I still haven't gotten around to finishing The Great Ace Attorney games, so please avoid spoilers for those ones. You can use general characters and stuff from it if you want, just no actual spoilers.

- Entry may be an Investigation, Trial, Comedy, or Miscellaneous so long as it follows the comp rules. (I will warn you if you make a comedy that I am a notoriously humorless judge, so it'll be an uphill battle. Don't let that discourage you from working on what you want though.)

- Entry may be incomplete, but come on. You've really got no excuse this time. But I won't judge too harshly as long as what is there is good.

- Entry may be a collaboration between as many people as you want, but all collaborators must make it known that they are collaborating and entering together.

- Entries must not take more than 3 hours to complete. I'm giving a lot of leeway here, since it's supposed to be 30 minutes, but basically, if it gets the point where I've been playing for hours and my back hurts and my eyes are tired, then I'm just going to stop playing and judge what you did up to that point, and you probably won't score very well theme-wise.

Deadline:

Your entry and a full walkthrough (if applicable) must be sent to TimeAxis and GuardianDreamer by December 18th 2022 at 11:59 PM UTC-12. A 24-hour grace period will be given in case of internet failure or other unforeseen complications. Your time limit is 1 month shorter than the usual 3 months, but I think that's fair given the scope of your case should be smaller than that of a typical comp, plus the comps have been pushed a bit behind schedule too (partially my fault), so this should even it out a bit.

Oh, and don't forget to make us playtesters when you submit.

Entrants:
  • Sonnie Celanna & DeathByAutoscroll Defused with 2d:12h:50m remaining.
  • super legenda found alive among the wreckage
  • CallMeBlue & MasqueradeDemure & applekitty Defused with 4m remaining.
  • XavierWright Defused with 1d:13h:13m remaining.
  • trialdude Detonated with 1w:1d:17h:16m remaining.
  • SuperAj3 & DJJ680 Detonated with 4w:2d:12h:30m remaining.
  • Awsome2464
  • Trybien & Spongesonic & eerew Defused with 8h:14m remaining.
  • AshuraMage Defused with 18h:16m remaining.
  • CorruptedFlame Detonated with 3d:6h:35m remaining.
  • enigma & DLA
  • Jofe
  • Dylan Dog & skyem Defused with 2h:15m remaining.
  • Bannedfrom7 & Batman129 found alive among the wreckage
  • Spoonmaster12 Defused with 4h:20m remaining.
The "TICKING TIME BOMB" Award Ceremony!

View the ceremony here!


Awards:
Spoiler : Trucy's Magical Catastrophe by Sonnie Celanna & DeathByAutoscroll :
Image Understands Deadlines - For finishing your entry before it was TOO LATE.
Image Best Writing - For walking side by side with the man himself.
Image Boss Battle - For the case with the best final confrontation with its villain.
Image Brevity Award - For cases where an ending was reached within 30 minutes.
Image Best Canon Portrayal - For cases that excelled at making canon characters feel like their official counterparts.
Spoiler : Superboss of the Turnabout by super legenda :
Image Great Potential - For unfinished cases with set-ups so interesting that they make us really want to see what happens.
Image Boss Battle - For the case with the best final confrontation with its villain.
Image Best Sound Design - For cases that make people's ears feel all tingly.
Image Gameplay n' Gimmicks - For going above and beyond standard Ace Attorney gameplay.
Spoiler : Athena Cykes: Ace Attorney - Wisdom at Law - DEMO by CallMeBlue & MasqueradeDemure & applekitty :
Image Understands Deadlines - For finishing your entry before it was TOO LATE.
Image Powerfully Bad Production - When bad presentation somehow wraps around into being great.
Image Most Cliché Character - For creating the best and coolest character we all want to be like.
Image True Logic - Case logic that doesn't work in normal circumstances, but is nevertheless ingenious.
Spoiler : Turnabout Reformation by XavierWright :
Image Understands Deadlines - For finishing your entry before it was TOO LATE.
Image Best Crossover - For definitely being a real crossover, really.
Image Golden Cactus - To be fair, you need to have a very high IQ to understand the Golden Cactus. The criteria is extremely subtle, and without a solid grasp of-
Image Hero Award - For having the best protagonist.
Image Butterfly Effect - For a case that diverges from canon in an interesting way.
Spoiler : The Turnabout Zone by Trybien & Spongesonic & eerew :
Image Secret Passage Award - Getting a bit of deja vu here.
Image Golden Paintbrush - For cases with the prettiest custom assets.
Image The End is Never The End - I don't think there was a broom closet ending.
Image Brevity Award - For cases where an ending was reached within 30 minutes.
Image Best Sound Design - For cases that make people's ears feel all tingly.
Image Gameplay n' Gimmicks - For going above and beyond standard Ace Attorney gameplay.
Image AAO Wizard - For pulling off amazing feats using the tools available.
Spoiler : The Golden Turnabout by AshuraMage :
Image Great Potential - For unfinished cases with set-ups so interesting that they make us really want to see what happens.
Image Golden Paintbrush - For cases with the prettiest custom assets.
Image Best Pre-Existing Setting - For making great use of an already established setting.
Image New Blood Award - For the people without a case under their belt who just said "screw it, I'm going all in".
Image Best Crime Scene - For making an otherwise uncomfortable location relatively pleasant to be in.
Spoiler : Summation of a Turnabout by Dylan Dog & skyem :
Image Understands Deadlines - For finishing your entry before it was TOO LATE.
Image Best Detective - For having the best crime-solver.
Image Golden Paintbrush - For cases with the prettiest custom assets.
Image Watson Award - For the case with the best sidekick.
Image Best Sound Design - For cases that make people's ears feel all tingly.
Image Gameplay n' Gimmicks - For going above and beyond standard Ace Attorney gameplay.
Spoiler : An Explosive Turnabout by Bannedfrom7 & Batman129 :
Image Great Potential - For unfinished cases with set-ups so interesting that they make us really want to see what happens.
Image A BOMB - For taking this competition theme very literally.
Image New Blood Award (For Batman129) - For the people without a case under their belt who just said "screw it, I'm going all in".
Image The Payneful Award - For including everyone's favorite rookie-crusher.
Image "No Pressure" Award - For a case with the highest stakes.
Spoiler : Turnabout Allergies by Spoonmaster12 :
Image Understands Deadlines - For finishing your entry before it was TOO LATE.
Image Funniest Case - On that day, our senses of humor grew three sizes.
Image Photo Finish - Started their entry at the last minute and still finished.
Image New Blood Award - For the people without a case under their belt who just said "screw it, I'm going all in".
Image Best Prosecutor - For having, uh, the best prosecutor. Yes.
Image Brevity Award - For cases where an ending was reached within 30 minutes.

Spoiler : Overall Rankings: :
Image Almost Actual Winner - "Athena Cykes: Ace Attorney - Wisdom at Law - DEMO" by CallMeBlue & MasqueradeDemure & applekitty
Image Actual Winner - "The Turnabout Zone" by Trybien & Spongesonic & eerew
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Re: TICKING TIME BOMB

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I have no idea if i'll collab with anyone but I already have a solid idea for what I want to do, so count me in on my own for now at least! (I'm pretty solidly set on my idea, so if anyone wants to collab i'm open to it but fair warning i'm pretty set on my idea.)
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Clarification on the comp theme: if the case has a gameplay section that may take quite a while to beat, does that count as extra time?
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Dylan Dog wrote: Mon Oct 17, 2022 12:23 pm Clarification on the comp theme: if the case has a gameplay section that may take quite a while to beat, does that count as extra time?
Yes, but you can assume that the player is using a walkthrough and knows what they're doing, so if the part that's making it take a long time is just not knowing what to do to progress, then that wouldn't count. I will know if something was just me being stupid and taking too long rather than the case actually being long.

Basically, it's how much time you would reasonably expect it to take for a normal person, regardless of what that time is spent doing. You don't need to get hung up on the exact time frame though, as long as it's clear that it's meant to be short.
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Sonnie Celanna wrote: Mon Oct 17, 2022 10:56 am I have no idea if i'll collab with anyone but I already have a solid idea for what I want to do, so count me in on my own for now at least! (I'm pretty solidly set on my idea, so if anyone wants to collab i'm open to it but fair warning i'm pretty set on my idea.)
I too wish to enter with Sonnie's idea...

That is to say we're collabing, not that I'm stealing it.

Though it is a very stealable idea...
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Confirming Collab with DeathByAutoscroll!
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Holy crap i thought i'd have to actually finish my case but if it's to make a short case then I may end up joining. not sure yet though!! ^_^

also what timezone is the deadline
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Now this feels like my type of comp theme. Still undecided on if I'll join, but I'm definitely going to be wracking my brain for ideas.
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eerew wrote: Mon Oct 17, 2022 3:25 pm also what timezone is the deadline
The deadline is when it's December 19th everywhere in the world. Whatever the latest timezone is.
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Alright, my entry will be "Ace Attorney but good" and will have one frame of Phoenix saying "I'm Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Online" and it will end.

I can already see who's going to be the winner.

Seriously now, I will try thinking of something, if I think of a cool idea, I will try joining in.
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Well, this is interesting alright, and well, I if I can make most of a case month and half late, I can do a short one in two! Bring me in. Time for Boss of the Turnabout.
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Quick, put me down as entering! BEFORE ITS TOO LATE!! :shock:
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Yeah, I think I'm in. Sign me up coach.
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So I read this comp title as "TICKING THE BOMB," which probably has the same meaning but sounds funnier. ("TICKLING THE BOMB" is a whole other category itself.)

While I have an impressive pile of short cases, that is due to my CUCS (chronic unfinished case syndrome). Given that I also suffer from SCA (severe complexity addiction) and am generally poor at short stories, I don't feel it's all that likely that I'll try to make something for this comp, but you never know.

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eerew wrote: Mon Oct 17, 2022 3:25 pm Holy crap i thought i'd have to actually finish my case but if it's to make a short case then I may end up joining. not sure yet though!! ^_^
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