A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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BBblader wrote:edit: hey, you know, I haven't seen Dypo or Wackyman around here in a while

you guys think they're going to drop out too? :(
I know, huh? Oh DYYYYYPOOOOO! WAAAAAAACKYYYYYMAAAAAAN! COME OUT COME OUT WHEREVER YOU AAAAAAAARE!

I hope they don't drop out. I want to try their cases.

Oh, and btw, WE ARE SO TOTALLY DONE WITH OUR CASE! WOOHOO! I don't think Diego has marked it as complete yet, but we made the deadline! Yaaaaaay!
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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I'm totally done too. Where's Parrie run off to?
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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I only have a little bit to add and then its officially done. But I'm busy with studies, so don't expect it to be out just yet.

EDIT: I'M DONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AND IT'S GOING TO WIN IT FOR ME BECAUSE IT'S JUST SO AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (=3) I hope. Time to send the links to Parrie-chan?
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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One more hour til submissions are closed. I have BBblader's entry and Diego/gotMLK7's entry.
You can either send it to me, post it in here, or make a thread in Your Trials. I'd prefer that last one because then my inbox won't get over-full and others can play it, but do whatever you like.
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paradoxinparticles wrote:One more hour til submissions are closed. I have BBblader's entry and Diego/gotMLK7's entry.
You can either send it to me, post it in here, or make a thread in Your Trials. I'd prefer that last one because then my inbox won't get over-full and others can play it, but do whatever you like.
Yay, I could do that? Ehh, I'm make the thread later.
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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Whew, hope I came just in time. I was waiting for permission to send it. THREAD MAKING TIME!
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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BBblader, Mimi, :holdit:, and the tag team of Diego and I have finished; I know that. But have Dypo, Fury, and Wackyman finished yet?

Aaarg! This tension is killing me! I have no idea who will win at this point! Imeanimfreakingoutjustlookatmeicantevenformarealsentencejustsomelongsingle
wordthatcantevenfitinadictionairyandiamsoflippingscaredyesijustsaidflipping
OHMYGODTJISTENSIONISHORRIBLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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ME! I WILL WIN! I DID MY BEST AND ALL MY JOKES ARE FUNNY--wait... not anymore...

...I guess I play-tested too much. :gumshoe:
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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Okay guys, I'm really sorry, but I won't be able to judge them until tomorrow. I have an exam and I need to go to bed early.
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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHRGGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah, phooey...
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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Well, it looks like we had a slew of last-minute drop-outs. So the order of review is:

• BBBlader
• Diego and gotMLK7
• Hold it!
• Mimi Mika

I will accept entries until I'm finished playing those.
Let the games begin!
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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...I've failed you. I'm sorry. :cry: :cry:
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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-grabs Dypo and throws him out a window-Have a nice.... fall.

Wow 4 entries, amazing!

Maybe I should have called my entry "Fail" instead of "Fall", its success in terms of replies is like this competition's success in terms of entries.
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Re: A 'Fall'ing Turnabout

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Spoiler : This review contains a ridiculous amount of spoilers for this trial. :
• I love the intro
• Orange in the bathtub?? Brilliant way of taking AAO discussions to the next level!
• "You have issues." <3
• I would have liked two different colours for the Aya/Ema conversation. It was easy to tell the difference but it might have been nice.
• Canon's narcissism is pure win
• Nice use of the cardboard badge :)
• The "YAHOO!" sound effect is great and used really effectively
• Canon reminds me a LOT of Barney Stinson (from the TV show How I Met Your Mother)
• Aya's uselessness is actually tragic. I feel bad for her.
• Sometimes your text is squished together (usually when you have merged frames; you have to remember to add spaces!)
• Nice allusion to young Payne's breakdown: "...knock that prosecutor's hair off"
• Canon doesn't need to investigate? This can't be good...
• She's so gullible, I love it.
• "And I shall prove it, or my name isn't Phoenix Wright?" Was that intentional? Because I thought it was and lol'd but then you didn't follow up on it...
• Payne's recognition of his pattern is kind of sad... he finally realizes that he's not the "rookie killer" anymore... which, while I'm on the subject, is a nice piece of foreshadowing.
• I love ALL of Canon's internal monologuing
• There are a few tiny grammatical errors, but nothing serious.
• The oranges vs. bananas fallacy... best. Argument. Ever (and Payne takes it so hard).
• "Glass Cannon" XD
• You use the gunshot sound effect a little too much for my taste... there are plenty more that you can use (Shocked, uh oh, stab, etc.) that aren't as grating
• ...There is SO much potential for innuendo in this...
• I knew that not investigating would bite him in the nethers!
• How'd you get the love eyes?! That's awesome!
• Nice joke with the "name and occupation" thing --- I'm pretty sure it bugs the heck out of EVERYONE. And pairing it with gratuitous Snackooing was great.
• "orange in the bathtub alarm" :calisto: can you just imagine?!?
• You probably should have added the evidence once piece at a time for more authenticity
• I LOVE THE ORANGE SLICE! Mad skillz XD
• The beginning of the cross-examination was sloppy. I would have liked to see the gif.
• Why didn't you use the cross-examination panel?
• ...Your reasoning behind the orange law is PRICELESS. I laughed for like five minutes. NOT BILLY MAYS!!!
• The Burger King/Kool Aid explanation left me shocked and speechless. I still don't know what to think... XD
• "You're an apple, Your Honour!" I nearly died laughing from the sheer randomness of that statement.
• I get a distinct feel of Zeel when Canon is hitting on Ema...
• "..random change in music.." Nice way to break the fourth wall
• Hobos are fun
• Canon's breakdown is EPIC! Especially the recitation of the Grinch.
• A Charles Mason gag?? SERIOUSLY?! XD
• I love how you and Canon have a chat at the end! Awesomest ending ever!
OVERALL RATING
Attention to prompt;
'Fall': 8/10
Quality of Trial; Comedy:
1. Chuckles: 10/10
2. Giggles: 10/10
3. Snorts: 10/10
4. Outright laughter: 10/10

FINAL MARK
48/50
96%

Up next: Diego and gotMLK7
Also, gotMLK7? Could you please edit your post so that the board isn't stretched?
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